City Girl

Thanks to family, friends, all writers and all the subtle influences that continue to escape my notice. Thank You.

ABOUT

I’ve begun work on my new text-based game titled CITY GIRL. It is slice-themed, set in the early 2000 era (before cellular phones were popularized…I guess that’s subjective depending on your country…).

You play as a small town girl who just moved to the big city (Old York City). To start her job as a PR intern. Being new to the city you turn to your childhood friend, Trom Readfield and get an apartment across from his. In this text-game you will get to explore the city, create new friendships or cling onto old ones. All while progressing your own career goals and the complicated clients you have to represent.

There are also a few secret routes that can be unlocked (e.g. Inside jokes, having a college boyfriend, and more).

The current word count is: 20k+ with one chapter complete, and the second chapter still in progress.
(In terms of updates, I will like to update at least weekly. Will announce if there are any delays.)

Last update: 13 Aug 2025. (Chapter 2 scenes and stats page).

Feedback: Would appreciate feedback on any grammatical errors, weirdly placed sentences OR anything that stands out to you, while reading.

And a warning it is adult themed. For any adult themed discussions , do check out the Adult Forum

:cityscape: CITY GIRL :girl: PATREON :p_button: INSTAGRAM :camera: REDDIT :speech_balloon: (play backup demo) :woman_technologist:

THEME SONGS:

MY OTHER WIPS:

-—> A Surreall World
----> The King’s Viens
----> Love Gene
----> The Queen’s Pawn

AI Disclosure:

No — This project does not contain the output of Generative AI
Yes — This project contains the output of Generative AI

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SCENES FROM CITY GIRL

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hi! congrats on the demo, but a look at the screenshots makes me think this thread might be better suited for the adult-content section of the forum?

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:+1::+1::+1::+1::+1: Arigatou

Changed it from young adult > adult-fiction

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There is a separate section on the forum for adult content , i believe that’s what the person above meant, not the tag .

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yes sorry thats what i was referring to! it’s a “genre” section i think, should be pink and show a lock icon next to the title. obvi your choice as author but it might better connect u with an audience looking for specifically adult content.

https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/about-the-adult-content-category/27770?u=raywilson

here is the link to the category i think! hopefully
it works i am quite technologically inept

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Looks like @tmaty isn’t a member of the adult readers group yet. You’ll have to join here first so you can see the category. And yes, I think this is also optional for you too. Congrats on the demo! Lmao at the 3rd screenshot.

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And here I was about to go to sleep, thinking “Another job well done.” * inserts dusts shoulder emoji *

Arigatou for the clarification.

I am honestly no better. I am still not fully certain on what’s going on, but I will look into in the morning (that’s if my shoulder doesn’t get worse). Plus I am now curious what this :backhand_index_pointing_down::backhand_index_pointing_down::backhand_index_pointing_down::backhand_index_pointing_down: is.

arigatou gozaimasu!! !! For also the link as well.

Hehe, till today I still have no way to fully justify that scene/route. I just hope people I know don’t read it aloud to me.

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For any adult discussion, a separate thread was created and S/O to those who pointed me here.

https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/city-girl/172493?u=tmaty

Leaving your bare-feet to make contact With the cold floor and a chill runs through your entire body as you hurriedly walk past the small kitchen on your right, then make your way around the couch, and into the bedroom across from it, before finally stepping into the bathroom.

You might want to review the above sentence.

An opened cotton of milk, and a tub of vanilla ice-cream.

Carton of milk.

He gentle blows on the soup, in an attempt to cool it down. Your lips part slightly, allowing the soup to make its way to your tongue.

gently blows

glass and slightly twirl it in your hand, watching its rich red texture swoosh from side to side. Trom leans back on the couch and half-crosses his legs, slipping his left calf underneath his right thigh. You also follow suit, leaning against the backrest and crossing both your legs as you sip your red wine.

yoga pants, tracksuit, nightdress, pyjamas

With your legs crossed, your knees slip out of your gown’s sheath.

Should the middle line be there?

Good luck

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Arigatou!!! Right back at you!!

Definitely not, my coding/writing practices of how I keep track of things are being exposed…. :person_running: :person_running: :person_running: :person_running: :person_running: will queue up the changes for the update. Thanks @ChanceOfFire.

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Interesting start. There’s a couple of syntax errors, concentrated mostly on the passage when you watch the news that are already on:

when you study your client, there’s a typo that reads “vocation” instead of “vacation”.

When you don’t buy anything from Benji, there’s still a line about him handling money you gave him.

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Arigatou

And this might be strange but thank you for not buying anything at benji’s. I don’t think I would have noticed that.

Will add the corrections on the next update.