Dark Secrets of The Elites 💃

Hi yall, it’s me and again. As usual, first I would like to thank family, friends, writers and all the subtle guiding influences.

New Title

I’ve begun working on my new text-based game titled Dark Secrets of The Elites.

Synopsis

When you were ten years old, your father had bankrupted the once billion yollar family company and decided to flee in shame, together with your mother. This forced your grandfather to come out of retirement and stir the shipping company back onto its previous course.

Over twenty years later, despite pleas coming from outsiders and your older cousin. He decided to step down once again and appoint you as the rightful heir to all his fortune as well as the new CEO of the family shipping company.

This has been your life, despite coming from a wealthy home. Your parents’ shadow of failure has always followed you closely. Placing an insurmountable amount of pressure on your shoulders and in return, you have found yourself turning to alternative methods to reduce the build up of tension or distract yourself at the very least.

It is unfortunately one of those alternate methods that will land you in a governmental plot.

The text-based game is slice themed and you get to explore as part of the 1%-ter:

→ Grow your family business.

→ Make purchases.

→ Save your marriage or let it end.

→ Participate in activities such as fishing, golf, yachting, hunting, etc.

→ Find your parents.

The word count is currently: 26k+
Last update: 18 Oct 2025

The demo is currently available on cogdemos: Dark Secrets of The Elites (Warning it is adult themed)
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(As well as on itchio)

With regards to feedback: Would appreciate any grammar corrections, weirdly placed sentences or anything that stands out.

** Also slight reminder, which I probably should have placed up top but this work is adult themed. So for discussions related to that, they can be posted in the adult forum**_____ :waving_hand: Adult Forum

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THEME MUSIC

The two theme songs are from very different genres but I feel like they are complimentary because of the themes I think that they somewhat cover.

(This song somewhat captures the raw restless ambition within the story)


(While I feel like this song somewhat captures the theme of the relationships, often being transactional and why the mc creates a bearer between most people)


And then with that said, I have to mention WHITNEY WEBB:

Literary watched this interview by her, covering the relationships between corporations and the shadow government. It really left a lasting impression. (If you do have spare time and haven’t watched it yet…you just have to…)

She also has a book titled ONE NATION UNDER BLACKMAIL.


OTHER MENTIONS:

UNCLE PANCAKE-KISS is a S/O to Uncle Waffles, who popularized the amapiano sound. Remember first time I saw clips of her performances, the vibe felt extremely palpable.

Then Seo Rooooogern (very subtle) is a S/O to Joe Rogan, literally learnt about soooOO many theories on that podcast:


ASSETS

(the penthouse)

(the townhouse)

(family estate)

(family ranch)

(yatch)


YOU CAN CHECK OUT PINTREST FOR MORE REFERENCES

MY OTHER WIPS:

-—> City Girl
-—> A Surreall World
----> The King’s Viens
----> Love Gene
----> The Queen’s Pawn

AI Disclosure:

No — This project does not contain the output of Generative AI
Yes — This project contains the output of Generative AI

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You forgot to capitalize the “I” in “I am” and might I suggest another line breaker for aesthetic reasons, that or you can just put the italicize text in quotation marks.

Runaway Code

Is it supposed to say “Will be in touch" to show that MC gives clipped answers to show impatience for employees? Or is it supposed to be “We’ll be in touch"?

Typo

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What is Clayisa’s deal? Did I miss read anything or is the passing off, because after learning that she threatened to divorce my MC and take everything he has, she has the audacity to ask how his day went and get mad at my mc when he ask her what she wants after everything that happened, so either I’m missing some details, the pacing is off, or she is just like that as a character

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When your grand father meets you in the library, he asks you about your “romantic life” which I assume he means the wife. Then it just skips to you being outside talking to Akkari. No mention of the present you got or your relationship with him at all. I don’t know if this is supposed to happen or if there’s an error here but I recommend looking into it. There are multiple instances where it feels like parts of the story are just skipped entirely. Another one is where you meet up with smut and choose your background with her. After you’re done recalling your “scandal” it just skips to you leaving her place. I don’t see the point of showing up at her place if there is no conversation between you and her and no context on your current relationship with her.

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Arigatou, much appreciated. I already started making the changes.

And yes exactly, I wanted to go for a slightly clipped-answer, temperment.

Okay, will definitely re-read it and try to lengthen scenes.

Since it also seems like certain scenes aren’t flowing through to each other.