October 2025 Writer Support Thread

I wouldn’t say thats a pointless choice either. Sure it may not function or do anything different. But flavoring is different from pointless. Choosing a muscle car even if it doesnt affect the story or cause any notable change besides it being referenced as the vehicle when the car comes up has a point of personalising your character in the story further.

A pointless choice would be being asked if you would like to buy coffee or tea. And then getting served water. You didn’t ask for it. It was pointless to ask since the plot was going to choose for you anyway. And assuming this isn’t intentional ala coffee/tea shortage to world-build. Its only then that its pointless. But thats because its terribly written. Its really hard to truly make a pointless choice since all choices sort of inherently have personalization attached.

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Fair enough, I try my best to have each choice mean something even if it’s just flavour text.

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Yeah, I’d second that, especially as that should allow some tugging back and forth on relationship variables, and even if it doesn’t, it ought to add some narrative to reinforce that character in the player’s imagination so what comes next is more emotionally impactful regarding that character.

Ha, I almost think I might have done that or something similiar, but in this parituclar example I feel like the dissonance the player will experience for that is synergestic to the expeirence of the story – just as the character is probably annoyed at getting water after wanting coffee or tea or whatver, so the player might be too. Though I’d gladly add that to much of this would get old very fast, so to use with plenty of moderation

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For my progress report for the month, not really much done on the WIPs I really should be working on, but after I aborted Blood & Blooms for the jam for now, I’m getting some progress on my new project Celtic Cry but probably ..,.. mmm …. quarter of the way there …. also had some progress on non-writing stuff, though plenty of more work needed on that.

Kind of thinking when I get all my goals done for the next few months I might take some time off of the writing/coding hustle for a while, but that will probably be quarter 1 or 2 next year, as there’s lot to do before then.

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Here’s a belated September WIP digest. I’ve likely missed some here for the same reason it’s late (I’ve been ill, and it’s lingering more than I’d like) but hopefully I’ll have the October one up on time.

Releases

CoG beta testing:

Estimated October releases:

New HG/Hobby WIPs

HG/Hobby WIP Updates

AletheiaKnights reviews

Other:

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Well, now that Microsoft is no longer supporting Win 10, I finally upgraded my personal computer to Win 11, and I must say that I hate it. I’ve been using Win 11 at work for some time and don’t mind it there. Home, however, is a different story. I don’t have a monitor at home; I use a projector and project everything onto a wall. I have found it easier to have my taskbar located at the top of my screen with my projector, as sometimes I have things blocking the bottom of the projection. Well, I just found out the hard way that Win 11 doesn’t have an option to move the taskbar, so I’m upset that I upgraded. I’m not looking to have people start bashing Windows or Microsoft and I don’t want to start an OS War; I’m just venting over something I find inconvenient.

Alright, so it’s the 15th. For those new here, we welcome people to share snippets of their work. This isn’t meant to be critiqued (unless requested), but more to help people get used to sharing their work or to show off something they enjoyed writing.

I’ll start:

Carousel Paradox

The spackle ceiling of the room has somehow become comforting to look at. The hills and valleys have no pattern that I can discern, which adds to a simplistic beauty. It makes me think of forests that live halfway up mountains. I can almost see where a river runs through one such range on the ceiling. A crack, probably in the foundation of the actual building, slithers partway across the ceiling.

Perhaps someday I’ll get out of this purgatory, and my family and I can spend it traveling. I’m not sure if I’d like that, or if I’m simply tired of being here. It doesn’t seem to matter what I do – this day always ends the same.

“Are you listening to me?” Paris’ words finally pierce the veil of my thoughts.

I glance at her and smile.

“You know, Paris,” I sigh. “I’m glad you’re my big sister, ya’ know?”

Her cheeks flush and she’s clearly taken aback.

“You what?” She guffaws. “Are you feeling alright? We went through a nasty storm, from what I gather. Perhaps you’re sick.”

She places a hand on my forehead to check my temperature, and I chuckle – if only it were so simple as that.

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As for me, I’m glad I have an MS account, and thus I took advantage of Windows 10’s free extended security updates that should last me for a year before deciding to move to a bloat-free version of Windows 11.

And now, time for another snippet, this time focusing on another antagonist of Lily Adventuresses! Episode 3 Chapter 3.

This snippet will be broken into three parts, in order to accommodate the riddle-based puzzle I'm implementing in the dungeon where the antagonist will be fought.

Josh Phil Piers Jurtl was once an idealist who wanted to spread the truth to as many people as possible.
But with a combination of being with the wrong people at the wrong place at the wrong time, the way he spread the truth brought nothing but ruin.
His childhood was nothing to write home to, and the early years of his college life as a journalism major was as equally insignificant.
When senior year came, however, his life would turn upside-down, both good and bad.
It all started with an otherwise innocuous interview with Dolus Omajnosis, the founder of Exercitus Popularis Novus, an anarchic rebel group.
With Mr. Omajnosis’s fragrant words that promised “total liberation”, Josh was radicalized, though he had to keep that radicalization under wraps on fears of creating unwanted chaos.
And upon his graduation, Josh would immediately dive into the issues that the rebel group have advocated, unknowingly recruiting many people to the group’s fold.
As the group’s terrorist activities escalated over the years, Josh was horrified at what he did, even more so when Mr. Omajnosis was killed by peacekeeping forces after a lengthy and brutal battle that effectively marked the end of the rebel group.
With the cause of his radicalization gone, he wanted to chart another course in his life.
That was when a government official approached him to become a public relations consultant for the then-rising leader, Lord Tenebris, based on his experience, and he jumped at the offer.
Unaware to him, his memories of his meeting with Mr. Omajnosis were wiped with a top-secret mind alteration technique that was an open secret among the members of the intelligence community.
But like any other impressionable human, he would find love in the person of Violet Selbor, a humble florist.
He even made friends with Violet’s friend, Veronique Sora, as well as her four children.
They all lived together in an apartment unit he rented with the earnings he made so far.
But one night, a terrible discovery would fuel his rage, leading to his act of arson that would kill Violet, Veronique, and the four innocent angels.
He discovered documents kept by both Violet and Veronique that all proved too much for him.
One linked Exercitus Popularis Novus to the government itself, via a secret deal Mr. Omajnosis made with Lord Tenebris.
Another exposed Lord Tenebris’s conspiratorial deal with [REDACTED] in order to crush proponents of Mandinao Republic, a planned separatist entity, via seceding an area that was originally part of the proposed republic to [REDACTED].
While he was confident that he erased all traces of what would otherwise be called “the awful truth” by getting rid of those who kept it, his neighbors were suspicious about his behavior when he left the apartment before the fire broke out.
But in interviews that were conducted after the fire, he repeatedly denied having intentionally set the place on fire, much more kill his own girlfriend and her five loved ones.
However, due to a lack of complainants, local police made Josh a witness in the case, unaware of his real intentions.
Over the next few years, he successfully absolved himself of his crime even without the help of a lawyer.
However, the echoes of his crime would still haunt him; and after much consultation from Lord Tenebris, he would target random people based on the mere suspicion of knowing the truth about the arson and the secrets he tried to bury with it.
He murdered people such as Santino Gil Dadbun, Tikspu Taki LXV, and Noeltis Sonown just to cover up this huge blot on his reputation, even as he continued to become the PR consultant for the much-feared yet seemingly benevolent leader.
He then underwent a painful body alteration procedure to make himself immortal, once again under the recommendation from the Lord Emperor himself, but it backfired, even taking a toll on his sanity and randomly killing more innocent people as a result.
He now exists as a cyborg-zombie hybrid, well-hidden in a well-maintained manor.
The one lesson everyone should learn from his life story?
Throwing your friends under the bus to gain the approval of strangers, and especially a despot, is pure idiocy.
The likes of Mr. Jurtl are choosing fame and money for loyalty nowadays.

Signed, [REDACTED]

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Man, the closer I am to finishing my first chapter, the more I write for it gahhhhjshsjsjs. It feels like I’ve almost been done for like a week now :pensive_face:

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I’ve been using open shell since the whole windows 8 mess, to put a windows 7 like start menu in. It’s so much better organised (IMO) than anything they’ve had since. So, that wont help you with your taskbar issue, but the short answer is sometimes you need to put modifying software in when microsoft decides to make things worse rather than better. Please do you due dilligence on this as I haven’t used this particular software and don’t know how legit it is, but a quick search pulled up this one to restore the taskbar from previous windows versions so you can move it. Reddit - The heart of the internet

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I’m currently physically incapable of writing because my old stress injury decided to flare up for reasons I can’t fathom, so I have no snippets for today. :pensive_face:

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Thank you for your efforts! And I’m sure I speak for everyone when I say to take it easy and don’t stress over the digest when you’re still recovering!

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The task bar was the final straw that pushed me to Linux. I had other reasons, but that (and the fact people have been requesting this basic feature be restored since Win11 was first released and Microsoft’s been nothing but ‘lol no you’ll use your computer how we tell you to use it’) was it for me.

(Note: Before I swapped to Linux, I did end up using, I think, Start11 for a while, but I didn’t want to rely on a tool future updates might break).

I’ve been using Linux Mint over a while now, and I like it much. Once you get it installed and figure out your software, it is very unobtrusive. Just works, you know?

Anyway! Here is my snippet (written earlier this morning):

Summary

*temp ostric_musing “@{(ostric_done = false) Ostric said he’d arrive early. You wonder if he’s shown yet.|You wonder if Ostric will have changed his mind again.}”

Not long after the sixth bell of Dusk has rung, you stroll to the corner of Druo and Avetu. @{(prove_strategy) Earlier in the evening, you pushed a cart of lanterns to this corner and left them in the alley behind the building at that corner. You’ll arrange them in the street before you douse the lantern hanging from Feylon’s lamp.|The night crew have begun their rounds. Since you turned this corner into a nexus of four different routes, someone should always be within shout-distance.|Nothia led you through stretches earlier tonight and your limbs still feel warm and loose.|${ostric_musing}}

The fog presses heavy as mist tonight, leaving your face damp and cold. Shadows, powerless in the lamplight, twist through the streets, seeking any weakness in the city’s protections. Some plaster against houses, craving the human warmth within, but unable to touch it and feed.

At the corner, the gas lamp glows. Its light bounces and refracts, forming a halo. Pretty and useless. The light from the emergency lantern hanging below it, though, spreads like oil across water and renders the thick fog translucent enough to see.

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Snippety snippet from Celtic Cry:

Couple Quick Snippets

spoilers In this first scene the prot a druidess enters a sort of ethereal vision world, with some of the text varying depending on her elemental focus. Was pretty pleased with some of my wording for the chapter opening there for this first piece . . .

spoilers during this scene, during a vision, the prot, a druidess, can look back and forth in time and listen to what people said during these time periods. Here she can look back to where she was truly born – sort of got this idea from Lord Wanderflame from Sense & Sorcery where I always thought there was a lot of raw energy from the firey destruction of his family’s home, and thought how cool would it be if one of my prots had a similar background … albeit here the druidess had not just her home burned, but her whole kingdom burned to the ground.

While it will be a short game for the jam, think it’s coming along nicely. Maybe about a third of the way there now . . .

Lovely imagery here . . . plus some nice intrigant drops too.

Aye, ditto – still amazed on these as it’s so much to track. Honestly, probably quarterly would still be enough.

Nice – shades of the classic short story The Yellow Wallpaper. Good sensory setting of the scene.

P.S. for anyone that really liked Blood & Blooms, fear not – I eventually plan to get back to that one, add on some more, and probably make a WIP thread for it, but may be a few months.

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Taking a week off to recharge, but here’s a snippet from when you are walking on the street with a companion during the Hungry Ghost festival month!

Hungry Ghost walk.

You continue along Nathan Road, a rapid-fire chime accompanying the green pedestrian light. A smell like damp cardboard wafts out of a cul-de-sac, as large warm droplets plop on the pavement, splashing onto your shoes, steady drips from air-conditioning units high above. You look up at the tong lau with their protruding balconies, and sidestep the worst of the splatter zone.

Another pedestrian crossing, then you stroll past a plaster wall, empty but for the ghost of a pawn shop sign, the scar left behind where the lettering was removed. Just above head height, reflexology and foot massage billboards in simplified Chinese. On the street, sandwich boards in faded, coated plastic. Through a break in the phalanx of buildings above, you glimpse a bare metal frame, several storeys high, where the neon signs used to hang.

Ahead, clothes shops and property agencies and a burger joint. A vacant shopfront with an overflowing jumble of For Rent signs, Centaline and Midland and more you don’t recognise, enthusiastically pasted over each other, contoured like a three-dimensional map. You take a deep breath, the fresh air steadying you. A man approaches, hawking loudly, then sees you and redirects his spit to the gutter.

A bright orange cylindrical rubbish bin stands near the railing, the shallow metal bowl on top full of cigarette butts, some still glowing amber. Black-and-white road signs announce Ning Po Street, Nanking Street. A sign advertises karaoke, backlit by an array of white fluorescents, the right half gone dark. Pink and blue neons beckon you into a “health centre”, the blinking arrow pointing up a dark narrow staircase like bait. From a mahjong parlour comes the sharp crack of a tile slammed on wood.

An old woman blocks most of the sidewalk, an iron rod in her hand. She’s stoking the flames in a metal barrel alongside offerings of poached chicken and barbecued pork in oily styrofoam boxes. The makeshift furnace blazes, spitting out ash and embers and choking black smoke that overpowers the minibus exhaust at the kerbside.

Danny stands a few metres away from the old woman, giving her space.

“Not many young ones carry on the traditions now.”

He’s quiet, just watching the smoke curl up.

You confess that you’ve seen these furnaces around this time of year, but you’ve never thought about what they represent.

“The paper houses turn into real houses on the other side.” Danny gazes at the woman. “But really… it’s for us. A reminder.”

You want to ask what kind of reminder he means, but he’s transfixed by the flames.

The old woman gently lowers a paper Playstation into the fire. It crackles as it burns, too loud for something made out of paper. You don’t think about who it might be for.

Danny turns his gaze away. He moves to a gap between the concrete wall and the old woman, and signals with his eyes for you to come along. You squeeze past, and Danny follows, a last glance at the fire before he catches up.

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Mmm. I wonder if a DnD session style schedule for writing would help get people more active in writing? Like. Grab a group of other people who write. Set a day and time you’re all free. And then every week. Get together in like a GC or something and just for that period of time. Write. Kinda would feel nice and maybe its just me but having active peers for some reason tends to motivate me doing stuff a lot more. Almost in a “I gotta prove myself”. Unhealthy as that may be.

Would anyone be interested in something like that? I imagine you’d have to probably update each other on progress, maybe ask questions or brainstorm together occasionally to maintain that peer environment. But like. Its separate from having a co-writer… kind of like this forum but in a more active manner… I dont know. I’m just spitballing.

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Huh, kind of like book club then? Although instead of discussing books it’s discussing each others writing. Sounds pretty awesome honestly!

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SNIPPET DAYYYY! (i’m a little late, but whatever.) this little dialogue only came about because my good friend was playtesting for me a while back, and she ran across this scene where the PC sees someone’s scarf flying past them and can either dodge it/scoff at the stranger/be startled/etc, or catch it. my friend chose to catch it, so i thought she was being nice to the stranger—but she actually was trying to make that choice to steal the scarf. obviously i thought that was hilarious, and added it as a choice in the game.

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☆ You hand it back, of course.
☆ You were planning on keeping it…but fine, you’ll return it.
★ You were planning on keeping it, and you’re not changing that now.

You wince a little, half-apologetic, and shake your head. "Mmm, I don’t know…It’s a nice scarf.”

The stranger’s easy expression shrivels up into suspicion. “Thanks, I know, so I’ll take it back now.” They hold her hand out just a liiiiiiiittle bit closer to you.

You smile slightly, but shake your head. "Sorry, figured you wouldn’t mind letting it go. Not like you were sprinting after it, anyway.”

Their eyebrows knit together at that. "Are you fucking serious? That’s my scarf. What the fuck? You saw me running to catch it.”

“Eh,” you sing-song. "Not really running—“

“Jesus fucking—you know what? Forget it. And fuck you, pal,” the stranger hisses.

Without another word, they slam into your shoulder as they walk past you. Too bad they’re so upset about the scarf, but they didn’t fight too hard for it, did they?

Content, you wrap the lush red fabric around your neck and continue on.

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Some libraries have a thing like that. So did Tolkien and C.S Lewis.

And there are some writing YouTube channels that do writing livestreams where they and the audience are supposed to write for a certain amount of time. My favorite is Abbie Emmons

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I had a great epiphany about one story idea of mine, which tied together two separate plots I’ve been pondering! It also means that one’s going to be a space opera spy thriller and not a post-apocalyptic spy thriller, which was something I had trouble deciding before. Good to have that cleared up, now I just need to decide if it’s a human or alien thriller.

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yall i’m getting SO close to finishing up chapter 1 it’s actually insane. i’m so !!! excited. and nervous. it’s weird because i know i had a demo up a whole year ago, but i wasn’t so nervous and excited about it then because idk i didn’t know what i was doing. had no plan, really, just wanted to get something written and posted for the hell of it (kinda). i feel so much more proud of this current draft, and it’s insane being so close to finishing the first little bit and getting to actually have a demo ‘out’ again!

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My writing group does this somewhat frequently. There’s also a technique recommended for ADHD that works a bit like this, it’s called “body doubling”.

I think a lot of people could benefit from this.

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