No need to apologize. And I realize that for the most part you are done with the game, so it isn’t a top priority.
First, if anyone knows about the rattlesnake: I know sometimes I got it as a pet, other times all I get is a rattlesnake skin wrapped around a rock. Is there a special level/choice which leaves one or the other? (I know you can’t have other pets, and you have to betray Hartigan)
Anyways, if you are still taking some last minute corrections:
Some grammar stuff. I thought I e-mailed these, but just in case:
Marshal James gives you a respectful nod, “Fine, fine. Is is Mister Marshal or Miss Marshal then?”
Suggestion:
The first “Is is” should be Is it
“What’re you trying to pull, tenderfoot?” the bearded man says as he glances over, "this is my brothers horse, sent on over from San Francisco
Suggestion:
“brothers” should have an apostrophe: brother’s horse
The barrel of his rifle shifts away from the rock out cropping
Suggestion:
I believe out cropping is one word: outcropping
I would. She’s very different."
This is a choice, and is missing a quote mark at the front.
The same with this choice missing a quote mark at the front:
What are you getting back from Salt Lake City?"
Another quote mark/response missing at the front as well:
Why do you have these monks with you?"
“Don’t I? Its a family thing,” he says as he keeps his storm-tossed gaze fixed upon you. he says distantly.
Suggestion:
You accidentally made a second sentence there, I believe you were going for “… fixed upon you he says distantly.”
Something else: when you are able to invest in the town, and you could convince Sadler to get in touch with Wong Dai Choi, it may drain the Marshal’s funds instead.
Additionally, during the encounter with Marshal Steele, if you talk to the various townsfolk (like Miss Maddy, Harry Winthrop, etc.) to completion, then go to Elko, upon returning, you can talk to them once more.
And now back to Billy
First, sorry for getting the Assayer’s and Floyd confused. However, I figured out what I was doing, and why it wasn’t initiating the Floyd encounter when you talk with Miss Caraway.
This is what happened to bypass it for me.
You get the following choices:
- I’ve got some questions about a marshal."
- “First off, I wanted to see you again.” [Continue Romance]
- “Let me get you another bottle first.”
If you pick Option 2, and go through things, as well as Carrie’s question about your intentions, then you get a screen to go to the Marshal’s Grave. If you invite Carrie along, you then go straight to the Marshal’s grave. However, if you choose ‘Go alone’, then Billy’s encounter with Floyd fires first, and after that is resolved, you can still take Carrie to the grave.
So, I guess chose things in the wrong order; I’m just glad I wasn’t hallucinating it.
Finally, I explored a new alternate path (new for me) where I was able to gun down Eduardo and Steele. However, the game sort of acted like Maria, and her bodyguard was still at the Grand Haven Hotel. Additionally, if you talk to the Uptons in the Painted Caves, and describe what happened to Steele, part of the sentence is just blank.