I’ve begun work on my first interactive novel, The Noir Curse. In it, you play a young magician that has been chosen to break the curse that has made night eternal on the land, along with nine other chosen ones.
The love interests are:
-A stoic elf with little words that goes by the name Razyel. At the beginning he isn’t much of a talker and barely shows any emotions at all, but if you do choose to romaticize him, he’ll start opening up to you little by little.
-A beautiful winged woman that goes by the name of Ivory. She is a sweetheart and won’t hesitate to stand up for others. She is determined on breaking this curse and is also eager to make friends.
-An exotic nymph that goes by the name of Ava. She is flirty for sure and won’t hesitate to approach you with more than friendly intentions!
-Rhysand, the eldest of the Night Gods (only by seconds really). There’s a dark sadistic aura around him and he won’t hesitate to play with people’s feelings. Be careful if you ever fall for him because you may never be sure if he is being fake or truthful.
-Cassian, the youngest of the Night Gods. Although they are always doing whatever their twin does, in all truthfullnes, Cas may have a softer heart than people are made to believe. They have always lived on their brother’s shadow and command, but they are eager to break free and start making their own decisions.
-The Sun God, Destan. He was defeated by the Night God twins and is now living captured in who knows where. From what the legends say, Destan was known for being a benevolent ruler and he sure as hell seems like a kind being. But, do people really know what lies under the mask of his benevolent facade?
In The Noir curse you’ll be able to:
-Choose your own gender and name
-Find true love with any of these ROs
-Break the Noir Curse
-Make life long bonds
-Discover the hidden secrets of the Night Palace
And much more!
Its mostly a fantasy, romance and adventure story and I was wondering if anyone would like to check out tthe chapters I have so far. Check if there are grammar errors, bugs or anything that could make it better.
This is my first interactive novel so I hope its at least slightly good
Chapter 1: 40,876 characters including coding. 7,333 words.
Chapter 2: 30,258 characters including coding. 5,299 words.
Chapter 3: 33,688 characters including coding. 6,113 words.
Chapter 4: 91,017 characters including coding. 16,544 words.
To play the demo, go here: https://dashingdon.com/play/juniper/the-noir-curse-demo/mygame/