Hi! I’m writing a book called Outbreak: Infected, and I’d appreciate if ya’ll read it and gave me some feedback. You play as a male, female, or nonbinary person trying to survive the zombie outbreak. The MC will starting off their apocalyptic journey as infected. However, they aren’t like any normal zed out there. While the other infected are mindless, hungry, feral, flesh lusting creatures who aren’t considered to be human anymore, you have control over your urges. You’re able to either gather infected/zombies and try to work with them, help survivors, join a group of bandits, start a cult, help find a cure, just try to survive, or a combination of those!
WARNING: This story will have blood, gore, and violence. Reader discretion is advised
Word count: 18,342 words (excluding code)
Updating schedule: Once per week on Thursdays
This week’s progress:
- Changed the people watching hobby to bird watching
- Wrote 1,094 words
What I need help with right now: How’s the pacing? Are the options realistic and diverse enough for your playstyle(s), or do you need more choices? The story is in the very early stages, and I’ve only worked on the doctor path as of now, but I’d appreciate any feedback you have for that portion!
Side note: Things that I say and plan for are subject to change.
To play the demo, go here: https://dashingdon.com/go/8617