Some of you might remember me from the “Tales of the Deep” WIP thread I posted recently. I’m still working on it but will probably still be a little way off since there’s lots of non-intersecting story lines amounting to a few books worth of story.
So anyway, I had this one in the works as well. It’s mostly written (unless I decide to add an extra chapter or two to it). Still needs polishing. It’s a very different style to what I’m used to writing where it’s shorter, with more choices, stats and each chapter intersects rather than branching into a million different lines. I decided to finish it first as it’s actually been very helpful in teaching me how to code these stories if nothing else.
I’ve put up a demo. More will follow as I get it coded. I’d really appreciate some feedback. What do you like/hate about it. Is it too wordy, to slow. Does anything not make sense.
Any feedback on bad grammar, spelling errors, broken links or those little question mark diamond things if you see them also very appreciated. I’ve been reading over it so many times, I’m sure I’m missing things by this point and reading what I think I’ve written rather than what it actually says
Thanks in advance
Please PM me for access to draft for beta testing