Near the end of the update, the choice to talk Poppet out of siding with Conqueror was grayed out, how do I unlock that choice?
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BTW the new two chapters were cool, really nice to see this updated
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I love this chapter. The dates are so good. I miss the stat indicator in options though. 
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Is there a chance for a book 2, where the main villian might be a doomsday like threat who wants to destroy the MC and earth… just a suggestion
Another suggestion for book 2 might be another one from MC’s planets survived and wants to recreate earth into their own planet that was destroyed the other scion who survived would try to make convert MC to his side, basically like ZOD from Man of Steel
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Let’s let him finish this one before we start worrying about a sequel, okay? 
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I kinda feel like the entrance to our Scion is way too quick. They’re an alien from another planet, in another solar system, but once they defeat a couple of bad guys, no one questions them about who they are and they’re intentions. Why were they were sent to earth? Are aliens real? There’s an alien among us?! Let’s try to kidnap him and proform tests! I feel like there needs to be more of an immediate uprising against our character, from the military, the federal government, the WHOLE world. An alien coming from another planet isn’t just something that gets glossed over once they do some good deeds. Military intervention is highly likely in the first few hours.
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This is true. Unless governments are working with Aliens already, then it’s a different type of response system. They have no power to hold the MC though. I can say that several governments will try negotiations. Loose canons aren’t a welcome sight by most. Trying to hop over each other to acquire this power for their own side.
I like how one setting works. Those with super powers technically would never need to worry about work/money. Bank heist is comic book silly versus truth of real world supes. Corps, governments and etc would hire, regardless of no citizenship. Look at military recruitment facts during big wars/crisis. (Aberrant does have irl political issues though. Found out most erase that part of the game.)
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Yea as an alien there is not much going on, supposedly it’s a huge deal probably MC’s biggest secret
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Right now, you’ve got to have her as a love interest to unlock that option. I might change it
to be triggerable based on your relationship level with her in general though.
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Appreciate the enthusiasm! But as @AletheiaKnights said, got to at least get this one out into the world before even thinking about a sequel.
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Thanks for the feedback! This is an interesting thing for me to contemplate. I’d kind of wanted to get into the actual super-heroing as quickly as I could in this first draft, but in a later pass I might think more about the ramifications of the player being (possibly the first) extraterrestrial on earth, and fleshing out more options to interact with the team as a regular person, rather than a hero.
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I’m not gonna lie, that “possibly the first” extraterrestrial has me a little excited, if you have anything planned for that.
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welp, guess I’m going to have to replay and be careful with choices cause that sounds awesome.
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Fix the saves, there appears to be an error since its denying that command. I love the idea of coming to Earth to act as an ambassador of your world, but disappointed of its ideals lol great to bring in some lore there like Omniman. It would be such a dramatic playthrough but in short I see great potential 
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Ack! Sorry about the saves, but appreciate your kind words. Should be fixed now, please let me know if it isn’t!
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One last little update (for now): tweaked a few choices and revised a few scenes. The next major update will (hopefully!) include the finale!
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Are the powers and abilities of the Scion set in stone yet, or are you going to give them other abilities once the final is done?
Why are the options for poppet and slienus to defect greyed out? My MC tried to help them.
Also, shouldn’t they also be grouped together if the MC tried to help both.