a good chapter I see
EDIT: I don’t know why but every time she start acting like a bitch…I want to just stand up a steal a kiss from her in order to see her reaction.
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“I’m just a mess in general”
I love saro???
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y’all r wild but you also inspire me to write cute things for her. i feel like being really nice to her is the only thing that can surprise her. or having any genuine interest in her as a person.
i’m the biggest supporter of saro and i’m starting a fan club.
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UM where do I sign up ho ly s hit
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watching executions is my favorite pastime now…
why do I get a feeling MC won’t be alone following night 
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More teasing Lilith? (is it possible?)
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I want to see that too… Is she going to blush , punch us, kick our gems( male MC), all of them? 
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teasing…
u see, my opnion, shes pretty interesting, just a little (a lot) bitchy, interesting nonetheless..
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Wow…it was such a nice read, the story was well written to the core and the interaction among characters were awesome… 
Lilith seems cuter by the days, and i can even call her lily …i chose to say “Aw…pity you” when i visit her after the blackout incident with Leo and her hostility apparently had soften, good sign indeed … Anyway, Theta’s earlier respond of " I think i should said i love you " is sweet as well 
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Leo just run off.
Hahahhha! I’m cracking up 
I know it must be an intense scene and all but can’t help myself. Why did he run? 
Leo, what a loser. Made things complex and left MC in this mess.
Also, I love the way Lily acted. She felt so… alive, like a real person.
And Theta, my favourite ray of sunshine, her bio is wonderful. I feel fuzzy reading it 
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What did I come back to? Everything is more sickeningly sweet than normal…
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It’s a smart move by @aequa to distract readers and put off their suspicions and then BAM! execution scene.
A story is supposed to be like Stockholm syndrome, kick the reader down so much that they’ll love you for the slightest kindness.
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all of these but mostly probably the second one bc she’s lowkey tsundere
eric i missed you how are you
same tbh. he prob thought they were dead. like lmao shit i gotta go bye.
also true. leo kind of sucks. huh. oops. originally that wasn’t supposed to happen. it might not happen in the future. i would love to delete it. hm.
really? it’s probably because i like writing for them the most. i guess i understand girls better. and i’ve thought about lilith’s character the longest. she’s easier to write for. also theta because she’s just a nice person who wants the best for mc without wanting anything from them. i like theta.
i’m a big fan of execution scenes.
i like this but i’m not very good at it.
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I’m still not seeing any updates. 
Is this a cache problem (and I don’t want to reset and lose my save… 
) or am I on a bad path, or something?
Want to defend Leo… but also don’t want to turn into @Eric_knight…
Ah, the dilemma… 
I like the stories that get dark in the middle, and then end up as cute happy rainbows at the end. 
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Hey… buddy i miss you too I am fine, thank you…i was so engage in running the scene of your story in my mind and was lingering the fond moments of our characters together , searching for the correct words to express my full appreciation of your story…
First of all, i was just wondering… when the MC first encounter Lilith again at the staircase , is it possible you add another option to greet her ? Me myself was screaming in my mind to say " Lily…I remember our past !! I love you !!! " 
It was only logic when i finally remember what had happen between us …
and second, i was so “jealous” of Leo for his opportunity to chase after Lilith, seriously the moment when Leo start chasing Lilith up the staircase …i was also screaming " What you doing Leo? Don’t chase my Lily… It is suppose to be my role …" of course i chase after them, following by Theta and Saro in this chasing game of “Cat and Mouse” …i miss my childhood days when i used to chase around with my neighborhood friends … It totally brought back the memory of happier days …
I totally understand why Leo did it…it was just a basic human instinct , when we are afraid we might accidentally hurt our friends…and we assume running away to hide ourselves will make matters go away… I understand it because i did it once when i was a kid, i was playing cat and mouse with my neigbours , suddenly the girl bump her head into a car parking there and started crying…i don’t know why but my initial feeling was " Oh…O …" and i just ran back to my house hiding , i was afraid that i will got scold by someone…i shouldn’t do that at all, because after the incident the girl never want to see me again… This kind of thing just happen like that, and sometime we just run away when we are afraid, Leo was totally in my shoes 
But i think Leo was lucky… I have a feeling that Lilith will continue to tease and “play” with Leo even after the incident , both my MC and Lily had such a fond conversation when i visit her after she omitted from the hospital , she didn’t seem to mind too much of Leo accidentally hurting her … I only wish my real childhood friend was as compassionate and kind like Lilith…
I like Theta too… that’s why i like the whole chasing scene so much, it was like Lilith was telling " catch me if you can " , Leo chase after her and i was like " Hey ! Don’t chase my Lily…" before i start chasing as well… then Theta chase after me ," Don’t leave me out of the fun…i love you too…" finally Saro came " Don’t you all dare leave me behind …"
I love your writing so much @aequa , it is like you are writing a " Love-Pentagon" among us 
Of the scene when all other students were staring at us after the accident , i was like telling " We are fine … are you all jealous of us or something ?? "
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I kinda feel you… Leo just broke my heart…
You just don’t fuck up and runway, man… that’s just wrong
That makes it even worse
*We like Theta
You have problems, man… 
Amazing how “Leo talking with himself in the hallway” makes Lilith think that he is a Mora… she never heard about bipolarity syndrome? She never saw LOTR? Gollum does that all the time…
Gollum is a Mora!!!
Or Leo has the One Ring!
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Lilith just want to tease Leo because he is MC’s friend , How lucky Leo was to have a girl like Lilith to tease him? Lilith most likely want to make up tales just to “play” with Leo, but it turns out…that’s the truth …
Like i mention, the whole chasing scene was heart warming , how i wish to still play “cat and mouse” with some friends now…Lol
It will happen to anyone , that’s just human nature … one of the reason i like @aequa writing is that, it is so “Human” and “natural”… some of the scenes are actually small detail that can happen everyday , and the character interaction just feel so "pure "…
He has very bad luck to me, at least…
Not anyone… no.
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It happens to me once when i was a child … if my friend was Lilith , i might still keep in touch with her 
Leo was just confused and scared … i am thinking Leo was running away with this authentic mindset : " Don’t be a hero, just run the heaven out of there… "
Leo’s mind ran in a very linear straightforward manner, not a lot of overthinking that clouds an individual’s mind. Running away was perhaps a straightforward action for some people… Did he seems autistic to anyone? He was talking to himself a lot right?
I will say " Hey… that’s cool Lily, now please don’t hurt yourself instead while trying to hurt me "
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That’s very specific, doesn’t means anyone will have the same experience…
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In this case i dont think id run away, i mean, they are my friends. But thats probably because the few people i consider my friends are very importante to me. Plus i dont really care for my well being.
(i wouldnt wait for them to Wake up though, id be too busy cursing myself for hurting them)
But if i didnt knew them , why should i care?
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Leo bad.
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