So far, there are four chapters posted, which is around 22,000 words.
Who are the ROs? So far, I have Leo, Saro, Theta, and Lilith planned as possible ROs. There’s a possibility that two more will be added to that. If I can manage it.
this isn’t done ok hold on
this also isn’t done idk man
I’m currently finished with what I’m considering the beginning portion of the game, which consists of six chapters and around 30,000 words. Chapter One, Two, Three, and Four are completed and uploaded. Chapter Five is being edited. The rest are written and I’m one or two chapters into the middle portion of the game.
My Tumblr, where you can ask questions anonymously if you’re a shyboi like me. I also post updates.
Seriously, this is pretty good. I wouldn’t stress over plot lines and perfecting everything too much, especially with this being a first project for you. Obsessively editing unfinished projects, especially in its early stages, just leads to burnout. Take it from me, I’ve been working on 5 chapters of one story for like… 4 years now. Lol. Just have fun with it and edit after getting feedback.
Anyway, what you do have so far is fine! You have a great writing style. One thing I noticed is that to me it seems kind of boilerplate “chosen one” story at the moment. I’m sure you have interesting things planned, though, so I won’t pass much judgement. I think the characters are pretty compelling, and are probably what I enjoyed the most.
I love all the comments are about the spit option lol. I meant to take it out the next update but now I kinda wanna leave it in.
Thank you so much. Your words mean a ton to me! I’m glad someone understands :’)
I guess that’s something I never realized after putting most of my focus into characters and world-building. I’ll try my best to steer it away from that! I suppose since I can’t control the MC as much as the other characters, I put more effort into them, Leo mostly, which is not good. Thanks for your feedback!
I just updated the stats page to have a journal (basically a glossary) so that if you’re confused about Spirits or anything, you can read more about it there. I’m going to add more “doodles” from the MC later. I guess this is a good time to ask if larger, slower updates are better than faster, small ones?