This is cliche but you are your worst critic, and even if you’re unsure, I promise you nobody here is going to think anything bad of it-- if anything, they’re going to be overjoyed that you’re updating!
but regardless, pls, ur health is most important so take all the time you need to prepare yourself or feel comfortable before posting. nobody would blame you even if you wait longer
When I’m nervous about posting something I just hit the button and turn it off and don’t look at anything related to it for a while but… that might not be the best way to handle things? Im not especially healthy lol
Regardless, everyone is here because they appreciate you and what you made. Not everyone can do what you’re doing, and you’re doing a pretty great job of it.
I can have a theory why people can be possessed by a spirit or “Ghost” Lol…
I would think that all spirit forms are some sort of electrical energy with different pulses and frequency, well , for a spirit to “occur” and "maintain " his/her appearance in one place, he/she requires the generation of number of occurrences of a repeating event per unit of time(which is the frequency )…
A human brain is also sort of a electrical motor where many parts of the brain are involved in the acquisition, representation, and execution of motor skills, during these action… traces of electrical pulses are generated by our brain and to each brain’s operation, require unique set of operating frequency …
There will be cases when one set of frequency is in synchronous with another set of frequency, in this case the occurrence of a spirit is going on at the same rate and acting exactly together with respect to the operation frequency of a brain …hence in this case the Spirit’s “Occurrence” or “Manifestation” integrate into the brain activity of a human , thus taking over or possessed the physical body as well
Alright. I’m done. I can’t look at it anymore. Ehhhhhhhh.
Chapter 9
This is a VERY short chapter. I’m so sorry I made the wait so long for such a small amount of words. I’m hoping the actual content means more than the word count. It’s very short because hopefully I’ll be able to get the next one out soon!! I’m like halfway done writing that one.
The whole thing is quite choppy because the chapter used to be something else entirely and was rewritten and edited like five thousand times. When I have time, I’ll go back and smooth things out. I just really wanted something to get out finally.
Let me know if I’ve left behind anything weird from testing. It’s been a long time since last updating and I might have forgotten to clean some things up lol.
I think we’re in the end phase of part one already. I mean, it’s been a year, but still. I also promised someone that I wouldn’t go back and edit old chapters. I’m trying to keep going forward without going back and editing constantly. I’m just going to stop looking at old chapters, unless there’s something REALLY important I need to fix. But for now, I’m just going to focus the best I can on finishing the story instead of perfecting it so early on. :^)
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ALSO READ MY PREVIOUS POST BEFORE PLAYING OK AY
this might have been my most confusing chapter ever sor ry
Thank you so much. I feel like I don’t hear this very much in real life. I dunno. Being discouraged a lot as a kid made me a perfectionist, I think. I’ll try to have fun in the actual writing and creative part instead of being so focused on reactions. I do the same thing by the way. I’ll post a chapter and run lmao. Thank you again for encouraging me sobs
Oooooh, so you think that they match up kind of? That’s really interesting. And a little scientific. I’m not a scientific thinker lol I never would have considered this.
Yeah …i think it is logical , since everyone’s brain wave has a different pattern and different frequency … an invasion of another entity with similar frequency wave will be like an invasion of virus into the computer 's OS
This… hits home a little hard, haha. It’s really easy to get so caught up in writing to please everyone else that I forget I was originally doing it for fun or for myself (not that I have anything to show for it on this website l m a o).
I’m really glad you pushed through and put this update out it was totally not as confusing as you think!! I thought it was lovely-- and not just because I adore ur writing style.
Although now I’m both excited and terrified to see what happens next with leo’s condition and the way that confrontation ended…
…but to be fair I too high-tail it the hell out of there when things get rough
I didn’t get any update? My game still ends with the whole underworld/dream thing…
Checking through the code, I do see a little scene that… Well, it’s certainly not the worst thing to ever happen to one of my fictional boyfriends. I’m sure he’ll be fine.
I shouldn’t have read… now I’m fucking anxious for the continuation… @_@
Okay, first of all… Leo FLUSHED ()! I’m in love again! * running in circles *
Theta is A-DO-RA-BLE!
In the car scene, when his nose bled, it’s strange that the first thing I thought was: “You too? We have so much in common! We are made for each other!!!”
Nosebleed means that the person is “more susceptible” to possession or something? Because it was how I saw it
Saro is totally best friend material, I totally scare all my friends, all the time IRL, when he tripped Leo… totally me! I hope we can be as mischievous as him in the future!
@aequa… you need to put a “punch Lilitch” option… seriously!
About the last segment… ok, sometimes I thought that… Leo has something… for Lilith… like… a crush (please, make this not be true)… I don’t know… they were related in the past? How can she know he is a Mora if, almost, nobody knows about them… this bitch do a lot of deep web research in her free time…
Leo is adorable running off… I mean, we could even NOT know what a Mora is (seeing that we had amnesia, and is a “low information subject”)… but he was so scared about the discover
Now stay the “who is the spirit in Leo”…
A Mora “loses” their souls, or the spirit just can control them?
Worry not, Leo, we will call Constantine to cure you!
PS: Is just me, or someone views Leo as Josh from Clueless? (personality-wise)
Such an old movie…
It’s already written and I’m editing right now !! ;o
No, but that’s close. It’s the same reason the blood was gone from MC’s tissues.
nO NOT YET… Maybe in the future though…
It’s explained a little in the next chapter how she found out! Idk if a Leo Lilith thing would work out. If he was ever even attracted to her, it would be instantly canceled out by her behavior, especially after her behavior towards the MC. He’s the type of person to not like someone if their friend doesn’t like them.
Yeah, Lillith probably fucks with the deep web lmao
Moras don’t lose their souls, since their soul is kind of their life. The Spirit just hijacks them basically.
i’ve never seen this i am a two year old sobs ; ^ ;
hi i wrote another chapter it should be uploaded but maybe it never actually did and this isn’t a real world
chapter 10
it is existent and kind of rough and not all the way perfect
lilith
i made it so that no one can make fun of me ever again because i fixed the nickname thing now i’m indestructible
I would talk more about it but I forgot what happened. I think a lot happened. Maybe not enough happened. I’m still mapping things out. I don’t think I ever mentioned this, but I think I’ll split the game into parts. I’m almost done with part one and I have part two not planned at all. I should go do that.
I think the next chapter will be fluffy but not that fluffy because that makes me nauseous.
I feel like I don’t hear this very much in real life. I dunno. Being discouraged a lot as a kid made me a perfectionist, I think. I’ll try to have fun in the actual writing and creative part instead of being so focused on reactions. I do the same thing by the way. I’ll post a chapter and run lmao. Thank you again for encouraging me sobs
(not that I have anything to show for it on this website l m a o).
it was totally not as confusing as you think!! I thought it was lovely-- and not just because I adore ur writing style.
My game still ends with the whole underworld/dream thing…
Well, it’s certainly not the worst thing to ever happen to one of my fictional boyfriends. 
I’m sure he’ll be fine. 
