Update is up
Link to the story
(If it doesn’t open properly in firefox, try a different browser. I seem to be having trouble with games at times on dashingdons in firefox today but it could just be at my end.)
I’ve opened up the door of fire as well as the night door in the Judgement Hall. You can go either way now.
I’ve tried to proof read it all, but if I’ve missed any sections I apologize. One of the chapters is pretty convoluted. I’ll do a few more read throughs and keep fixing typos as I come across them, but if anyone would like to tell me of any they see I’d love to know. Same with bugs. I’m hoping I’ve debugged it now, but if you see any weird code, jump somewhere you shouldn’t or have options available or greyed out when they shouldn’t be, please let me know. (Some options may be occasionally greyed out for a reason that isn’t always immediately obvious if one of your stats- usually health or state of mind aren’t right, but I can always check that at my end.)
I’m also going to put a few polls in here, as I’d like to know what readers think about it.
If you end up at a crossroads where you’re trying to find the fire sigil, is it too easy? It’s on a timer, but I’m not sure if I need to up or down the number of turns you get to solve the puzzle.The text at the choice will change right before you run out of time.
- Not enough turns. I can’t solve it in time.
- About right.
- Too easy. Solved it with time to spare.
- Not sure
Also wondering how many people find the Oneiroi (voice entity) on their FIRST playthrough
- I found them.
- Didn’t encounter them.
- I didn’t find them on the first playthrough, but did on the second.
- What are you talking about?
Edit: If anyone would be willing to post their stats at the end (especially mood, thirst, hunger and health), whether you went via the night or fire realm, and if you encountered the oneoiri that would also be astounding helpful for knowing if my stats checks are largely where I think they should be