Current votes; (I’ve bolded ones in the lead and italicised any ties.)
1 x The only good one…
10 x Lullaby
6 x Azurean Dreams
2 x Snake and ladders
6 x Love Games
1 x The Big Bad
2 x The Twelfth Key
1 x Memories
6 x Puppets on a string
7 x In my head
4 x Shadows
2 x Grim Hello
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If this stays the same Lullaby and In my head would win while I’d draw one of the following out of a hat Azurean Dreams, Love Games or Puppet on a string for the third “winner”
Damn it. How did I miss this thread for so long?! Ah well, 'tis a shame I didn’t buy Unnatural yet, I don’t have the money. Nor do I have my own credit card. I will buy Unnatural though, I can promise you that, but the time will be undefined. Anyway, is there any returning characters to Season Two?
@Nocturnal_Stillness Alright, thank you. Could anyone link me to- never mind, I’ll get there myself, I really should look around more. And once again, my apologies for being broke, I don’t get an exact ‘allowance’. I’m also in a dilemma to ask whether scarlet will be returning, because if I do, that may spoil things for when I buy Unnatural or play the Second one.
Thank you for all the votes; here are the final results!
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2 x The only good one…
10 x Lullaby
7 x Azurean Dreams
2 x Snake and ladders
6 x Love Games
1 x The Big Bad
2 x The Twelfth Key
1 x Memories
6 x Puppets on a string
7 x In my head
4 x Shadows
2 x Grim Hello
1 x Drained
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So this means Lullaby was first, with Azurean Dreams and In my head coming joint second and third.
I shall post the info about the cases later tonight. So stay tuned!
First things first, I love Unnatural. Modern day monster hunting is one of my all-time favorite types of story, and you certainly did a fine job creating an interesting world. The case format is fun, and I enjoyed knowing that my character had successfully prevented murders, saved lives and made the world just a little bit safer, every time. And I’m very excited to hear that there will be a Season 2. So know that what I say next, I mean only because I want your game to be as successful as possible.
Please, please, please hire an editor. Or go over it more yourself. The story is good, yes, but is full of poorly worded sentences and grammatical errors. Missing commas and worst. It made what would have been a slam dunk of a game into one that, while still among my favorites, needed some work. You are obviously a talented and hard-working writer. I can’t imagine putting in the time and effort needed to put together a Choice Of style game. But please, go that extra mile, and I’m sure your fans will love your work all the more because of it.
I’ve been going over it again for the next update and am looking for an editor to help. I had a bad about experience with a hired editor so was not keen on hiring again. But improving the writing is definitely on my to do list.
Sorry about the delay been a bit under the weather today; but as promised, here is the information about the winning cases. Enjoy.
*please note; I’m keeping spoilers down to a minimum.
***Azurean Dreams***
This particular case revolves around the MC’s dreams after a certain event. This case will reveal a lot about the Azure as well as shedding light on the MC’s mother. I will also be the first time you meet a proper fully fledged Azure. Depending on your actions; she will either become an ally or an enemy.
***In my head***
This case revolves around one of the “new” Unnaturals. This one is called a Luna; a young child (in this case a young girl) with the power to manifest her subconscious in the shape of a spiritual wolf. It is harmless when she is happy, but can get violent if she is mad.
***Lullaby***
One of two unique cases tied to a choice near the end of Season One. It revolves around a rumor of boats washing up ashore with no crew members or signs of foul play. The only clue was another rumor, sightings of a mysterious woman spotted near a beach three days before each boat would wash up ashore.
In the stories, those beings project their souls in the forms of animals to protect their communities, from general misfortune like crop failure or weather, or vampires (krisniks), witches (benindanti), or demons (livonian werewolves).
So I thought you might want to give a little nod to those legends and have people like Luna have a cultural propensity for protecting their communities against dangerous unnaturals and other threats.
