UnNatural - A supernatural horror game - editing complete, beta testing over

Someone absolutely epic!! Probably Japanese. Kind of a “epic master” type. Also maybe someone OCD.

A character idea
The completely paranoid person. The character think that anything that happens is caused by monsters even with no evidence that a monster was involved. Or thinks that certain members of the SRT could be monsters. For some skills, have the character be specialized in survival or solo combat. This paranoia could have been caused be an attack by a monster, and have a friend turned out to be the monster.
Don’t mind if the character dies.

a half and half half person half monster

Not a character suggestion, but I think it’d be cool if there were some more chances to affect to outcomes of events. Like maybe having the chance to save the cops or something, instead of just always getting there just in time to clean up the mess. I mean, what makes your bullets to the head more effective than theirs anyway?

As for a character idea: How about the a horror trope?

Name: Ashley Baker

Appearance: Female, Caucasian, early 20s, long blond hair, and a build that could modestly be described as curvaceous.

Personality: Overly concerned with own appearance and weight despite being below average in the latter and above average in the former. Easily confused and frightened, but also not very perceptive to dangerous situations. Quite charming when she tries to be.

Skills: Skilled at social manipulation, good physical agility/flexibility and memory for inane sports team cheers, lack of perceptiveness often leads apparent fearlessness subverted when she finally realizes the danger.

Background: Ashley grew up a privileged only child sent to public high school only because of her parents’ miserly tendencies. In the social insanity of that place, she rose to about the highest point her life was likely to reach as head cheerleader. After graduation she immediately began attending a mediocre college that was chosen by her parents more for the price than the quality of it’s education. There she joined the life of the irresponsible college student with gusto, managing to squeak by her first two years of classes thanks to more intelligent students she manipulated into helping her. In her Junior year she joined an SRT recruitment drive, mistaking it for some sort of weird rave. The recruiters were in disbelief when she passed the test, and she wasn’t sure what the hell was going on, but on the other hand she was getting paid for this, so she didn’t really mind.

In keeping with the horror trope origin of the idea I suggest that it be possible for her to die in a myriad of ways, but also be possible for her not to, depending on the player’s actions.

@everyone

thanks for the character ideas.

Update:

Gone through the pilot once so for and made some changes.

Currently working on episode 1.

The S.R.T now consists of three different units; Unit Alpha are the monster response team (think SWAT), Unit Beta are the research team and Unit Gamma are the specialists who hunt A-class monsters.

You are put into Alpha or Beta depending on your stats and can either work towards Gamma or stay in Alpha/Beta.

Sounds like a plan. Love the idea of different levels to S.R.T. Makes it more complex and mysterious, I imagine you’d need clearance to find out what’s going on in the other branches of the corporation that isnt yours… Maybe in your own branch as well.

Yeah you can build up your level of clearance to get more Intel on missions.

Another update episodes will work like this

pilot; character creation

episode 1; start of srt alpha/beta leading to syncing with a guardian.

episode 2; promotion opportunity or advancement in current unit.

i like beta

Minor update:

uploaded as much as I’ve done, not as good as I would like but currently using a lot of *if codes and want to make sure its all working.

So play test it please (try playing as both sexes for a slightly different scene at one point.

link: http://nocturnalstillnesscog.webs.com/Unnatural/my%20game/index.html

Will be continuing the work on it tomorrow.

One of the options after the bully scene says “I think I did good”. I’m pretty sure it’s supposed to be “I think I did well”. I know. I’m a grammar troll. Also, when Craig is studying, one of the options say “I leave (.) They deserve it.” You might want to change that. Or even something like “That jerk deserves it”. Kudos for providing some reason to Criag’s change, by the way. But I got an error soon after starting line 73 next_page non-existent. But so far it’s great!

@Shintaro

glad your liking the changes, consider those errors fixed :slight_smile:

ugh i ask for beta and i get alpha

if ur still looking for people to add to the game i have one

@vampierkid222

That question is who you ‘want’ to work for who you get depends on your stats.

Post your character there still are four more episodes still to come.

umm at a certain seen after you get your id card you go to the squad roomadn three toher member talk to you you can say yes i am name or i am name nice to meet you but wichever one i choose makes the game freeze

The previous error is still there for me… :frowning:

Not sure whats happening but the game crashes or freezes up when i meet the squad.

My game freezes up at the “0530 hours” scene.

Game froze when I met the squad, also after you take the self defense class two of the options are incorrect; the first one says “I won’t give him time to react, I’ll hit him as hard as I can.” the second option says “I’ll let him get ready, then take him down” I was playing as a female so Alice is the bully, the pronouns would need to be changed to her. Digging the update though :slight_smile:

Thanks I’ll have a look today.