Thank you. I will send you the link with the updated demo as soon as I’m done.
Is there anyone else who would like to read the new demo before I officially post it, to help me with finding possible errors or by giving me feedback on some complicated scenes (basically like a small Beta Test)?
if it would help you sure count me in
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I’d like to help with feedback
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I’d like to help too, but am probably without internet for the weekend. So the earliest I could give feedback would be monday. As you probably guessed I’m not native in english, so chances are i’ll miss some grammatical or spelling errors. But if you’ll have me, I’m happy to help.
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Don’t worry, I’m glad about every kind of help.
Also, I still have to rewrite the few complicated scenes I was talking about one last time before I will send you the link, which might still take a few days. So, you don’t have to worry about your missing internet.
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I as well would like to help in anyway.
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I like too help out if u dont mind
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I can help with spelling.
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Thank you for your offered help @Noah, @Aleksa100, @Frogs, @Orchid, @ebacyes, @Terrell_Williams and @lokidemon007. As soon as I have corrected the few remaining complicated scenes, I will send each of you the link with the updated demo.
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Miss albrecht is younger than i guessed
How old would you have guessed her?
A few hundred years more
Honestly, since I still try to refine the concepts of the ancestors a little more, I could still change Henriette’s age. Maybe add two or three hundred years.
I thought Henriette would be older. It sounds like she was born in the medieval Holy Roman Empire or something, which is older than 460 years.
About jack as well, revolvers only became common in the 19th century so what gun did he use back then?
Has already been asked or mentioned in what time the plot takes pkace?
It’s modern day America
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The Holy Roman Empire existed from the Early Middle Ages until its dissolution in 1806. Henriette was born in the middle of the 17th century, which still falls in this period. Also, I only said she served the empire, not founded it.
At first, Jack used a modified Musket and a Flintlock Pistol as his Soul Weapons. Then, when he went to America (somewhere in the early 19th century) he changed the form of his Soul Weapon into that of a Revolver, because he was fascinated by the unique design of those handguns.
The story will take place in the year 2020 and will be mainly centered in America (at least at first).
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How efficient were his guns in combat? In real life muskets/flintlocks were very inaccurate and not really efficient in a 1vs1 scenario
Love the info on the ancestors!
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