I’m really sorry, but I’m not done with the new demo yet. I have still a few chapters to go, or at least the first chapter, before I will post it. I’m really sorry to let you wait this long, but I hope you understand the reason for the delay.
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Is there a option to bring him into custody and recommend death row???
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Would waltz into house/apartman like i own the place shoot him in knee then in arm and finally in face or scar him real good both physically and mentally (something like shadow of war shame)
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I imagine the Gunslinger scene to be something like this
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What is going to be Robert’s story?
Sorry, but I haven’t worked that much on Robert’s backstory yet. The only other backstories which are already done are Emilia’s and Tara’s.
However, if there would be an interest, I could post the backstories of Mia and Tara.
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Maybe post the demo like it is now and update it later with more chapters?
This way we can check for bugs and typos
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Hmm, a good suggestion, but I want to finish at least the beginning of the first chapter before I post the demo. The reason for this is, that the Prolog has almost no relevance for the actual story and only serves as means to define your character and to introduce you to the world my game takes place in. I want to give you at least a small taste of the story, which is why I would like to finish at least the beginning of the first chapter. I promise, that it won’t take that long anymore.
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Yes, that would be one of the possible Options.
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I’d love to see what you have!
Liked learning about Emilia!
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How powerful is the Demon King? Does he have a chance to beat one of the old dragons? Or maybe some of the ancestors.
Also how did you meet Mia and became friends with her?
Maybe in a case she’s a succubus so you go to investigate her and clear her name
You were childhood friends before you were a part of the DSR though so I don’t think you’d have to investigate anything.
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Emilia’s father is extremly powerful. In fact, he is probably one of the strongest existing Demons. However, even with his incredible powers he would still be unable to beat the first Dragons.
In Terms of the other ancestors, he do could fight against them, but it would be a extremly challenging fight.
After Emilia and her mother arrived in Ashfield they immediately started their new life. Seraphina joined the DSR, thanks to her wide knowledge about the arcane arts, and became a member of Team Bravo, the field team that was led by the mother of the MC.
Mia on the other hand visited the Middle School as a normal student. However, this was already a challenge for her. Being a succubus, her body produces an aphrodisiac Pheromone and much to her dismay, this effect inadvertently makes almost anyone in her vicinity lust over her. To avoid this she constantly has to take precautions to avoid inadvertently seducing other students (or teachers), by making herself look dull. She often wears plain and heavy looking clothing underneath her uniform and avoids make up, but if a person touches her they still become aroused, which causes her to avoid the contact with others. Sadly, this didn’t helped her much with finding friends and it actually only increased her shyness. However, this changed when she met Chris and the MC. To her suprise, neither of them was effected by the aphrodisiac Pheromones of her Body. Of Course she still didn’t know how she should interact with them, especially with her lack of social skills, but the MC and Chris helped with that. They helped her with her problems and also keeped those students at bay, who were a little too affected by Mia’s pheromones. Over time, Mia slowly warmed up towards both the MC and Chris and managed to keep her shyness at a minimum while being in their Company. This lastly ended in a great and solid friendship.
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Does Mia’s pheromones only affect humans and that’s why you weren’t affected? Can she feed on non-human/demon emotions too?
Also who is stronger, Seraphina or the MC’s mom?
And does Mia has a crush on the MC or Chris or they’re just friends like Maria and Laurence?
No, Mia’s pheromones affect both humans and non-humans alike. However some species are immune against the effects of the pheromones, like Zombies, Kitsune or Soulmancer.
Also yes, she could as well feed from the emotions of other non-humans.
They are quite equal in terms of powers.
Mia actually do has a crush on the MC, though she is to shy to confess her feelings.
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If you were to marry Mia and have a kid, what specie would the kid be? Also can a male be a succubus too?
The species of the child would correspond with the species of one of the parents. However, in some cases it can happen, that the child inherits some of the natural powers of both parents.
Yes there are male versions of the Succubus, who are called Incubus.
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