Good spot - Corrected.
That is the last choice of that route in the demo, but it should have let you complete your choice.
Good spot - Corrected.
That is the last choice of that route in the demo, but it should have let you complete your choice.
Warning: Potential Spoilers.
Chapter One: Hunted
Chapter Two: Restless
Chapter Three: Resolutions
New demo coming out today - big hints for what comes next as well as more on your gift. Expect it within the next 8 hours…
UPDATE:
We are now just a smidge shy of 27k words. This update allows you to learn more about your gift and choose your speciality. It also introduces a… shall we say… unsavoury aspect of the book.
I blooming hope we will be able to help Maen
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Oh, just thought, Dashingdon have a save system that can be handy, do you think that could be implemented? 
Good point - I forgot about the save system. I’ve just added it now. It’s my first time using it, so I hope it’s as easy as pushing a button…
Edit: I just did a little reading and hopefully it should now be working.
Edit 2: Regarding Maen, I can’t answer that without spoilers, but this isn’t the last of those two characters.
Figured about the spoiler, just had to get it out, lest I explode. Freepin’ slime-crusted fecal creeps… 
Quick test, save system appears to work. 

great game! it was fun 

I’m glad you’re enjoying it. The next update should be out at the weekend.
I finished the demo and from what I have seen, MC have some kind of ability like low mind control and it can be improved with a hidden stat called Control, I wonder what ability we will have ? Control people, memory, emotions ?
UPDATE
The demo has been updated! It is now over 30k words. The updates are for the Kola and Frogger paths. The Turq path will be updated next. The true nature of the game is revealed in this update…
Ah, time to get on the train again then. 
Choo choo! 
There is actually a way off the train in this demo - albeit only briefly to see nature at closehand.
Haven’t gotten off it yet, but I’ll just count to a hundred…

This is awesome!! Honestly like it’s amazing and is making this 8 hour car ride more bearable 
great update! that was an interesting twist 
very “interesting” description of a man going to the washroom and doing his business 
What map creator did you use? Or was that freehand? Absolutely gorgeous.
I used a site called inkarnate.com
See post 14 in this thread for more info. It’s a great site and I highly recommend it!
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