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Spelling errors in chapter 3.
a rare treat, considering coffee beans are low in supply, but you suppose with so much activity buzzing, the caffine may be nescessary
Necessary
When talking to B3 in chapter 3.
“So… Can you actually feel emotions?”
You don’t need the bolded word capitalised.
Under the option “So… can you actually feel emotions?”
That is an… Interesting question."
You don’t need the bolded word capitalised.
It is almost like… If your brain were only a peice of a larger brain.
The bolded word shouldn’t be capitalised.
It is almost like… If your brain were only a peice of a larger brain.
Piece
A peice that is still capable of individual processing, yet connected to the same sensory organs as every other peice.
Piece
“and I believe asking about another beings age is an act that is labled as rude among humans.”
Being’s
"Individuality is not something that is actively encouraged among us. It is more of a… Light suggestion.
Uncapitalise the bolded word.
You instinctively look towards the voice, apperantly belonging to a man that had been standing beside you.
Apparently
quick as lightning you duck to the side, easily taking yourself out of the way of his feignt.
Feint
You use the disctraction perfectly, lashing out with a quick kick to his shin.
Distraction
Edit
Blueprints and papers filled with notes are scattered against various tables, several tools lay haphazardly across he room,
The
At least, not in the Tech Depertment.
Department
I spend all day making sure our generators don’t blow a gasget.
Gasket
While I did utterly excelent in every course, I passed leadership training without batting an eye
Excellent
You begin to take a more liesurely pace as you amble your way down the tunnels.
Leisurely