I get that same error too.
part6 line 393: Invalid expression, couldn’t extract another token: . You’re bone weary from the events of today. You wish you could rest instead of riding through the night.
…maybe, yes, I am 
…
It’s really great to see a WIP with some Scottish culture in it!! This story seems really fun, really enjoying it.
There are some mix-ups with gender pronouns during the scene with the stable boy
@idonotlikeusernames Sorry I’ll try to work out why the error message is popping up and fix it in the next update. Only good thing is, is that it’s the end of the story I currently have up so you’re not missing any of the storyline as it is.
@WaltzinElf Thanks 
I’ll look at the code in that section and see what I’ve done to mess up the gender pronouns.
The rest of you: No kidnapping the stable boy (until he’s had a least a chapter’s head start anyway)
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if you choose to play as a male and during the character creation you choose the option,
- Steadied him. Strong and stocky like many of the local residents.
you get this.
Thanks @Zbez, I’ll look into it
Awesome! I found some typos (that I should have taken a photo of so that I could notify you huhu), but they were all minor like a missing letter in a word. You’ll see them, I bet. I was too engrossed in the story to pause. I’m sorry. I should have been more helpful. Anyway, you got me at having a dog/wolf companion (with a tragic background)! Haha. I really liked it and I look forward to reading/buying the full bersion of this.
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Thanks so much @iota_moon005. Glad you liked it 
Are their any ROs, or is it RO free?
Hopefully RO available if I can work out how to write them 
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I here you dude, I am dreadful at writing romance but great at writing action…it’s a curse really.
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Hi @WaltzinElf. I know it was from a few weeks back so you might not remember but do you know what pronoun was being mixed up or was it a range of various ones? It’d be great if you could tell me if you were playing male or female (I’m just having trouble finding the mixed up pronouns). If you don’t remember, no worries. Thank you!
Hopefully will have a bit of an update up in the next few days. I’m busy fixing grammar issues (so many grammar issues 
) and some coding bugs at the moment.
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Hi All,
Have put up a bit of an update. Please note the old link (dropbox) won’t be updated from now on due to the incoming dropbox issues. If anyone’s having issues accessing dashingdons let me know. If you have any issues with the dashingdon’s system not updating to the new files, just upload the story in a “private” window or clear your cache and that should fix the problem.
Hopefully I’ve fixed the game breaking bugs that were at the end of the last update and done a heap of grammar fixes (although I’m sure there’s more I’ve missed).
At the moment I haven’t written any of the southroad/choose not to rescue anyone text so if you want the longest story choose to go north.
As always I’d really love to hear back from what you think (good or bad all welcome), as well as any grammar or coding bugs you might happen across.
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Just found it. Read it. Want more.
Seriously I don’t know how you got so far along in this story without being on my radar. Of course, I won’t let that mistake continue now!
Mmmmm! Ominous warnings. My favorite!
You weren’t here lad. You didn’t see the terrifying monster that rose from the depths. Larger than a siege engine it was, with a a pair of snake like neck that struck with such speed that none of us had the chance to react before it had dragged $[pher} off the bridge and disappeared under the water. I fear she resides with the living."
Is resides with the living a mistake?
Also
had the chance to react before it had dragged $[pher} off
Wonderfully written and original There were a few typos, one when they are coming to the castles gates, it’s should be gated instead. Also servant/peasant in the paragraph below should be servants/peasants (forgot which one it was)
there is some gender swapping problem with the heir, some example with the prince :
She drops her voice in a passable impersonation of the King’s baritone speech.
“Prince!” Brion hisses urgently. “You mustn’t speak like that.”
“Come now Captain.” she continues lightly. “Who’s going to tell my father? Not me. Not you. How about your friend here? Come to think of it I don’t believe we’ve met.”
She regards you with deep green eyes, made even more striking with her pale, lightly freckled skin.
he turns with a swirl of his fur lined cape and hurries away down the corridor, soft foot falls echoing as she disappears around a corner and out of sight.
I am really loving this story, and the reactions by Dog and Otter when they talk about me being in love with the princess were hilarious! I can’t wait for the next update 
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Wait; does the guard captain have the same name as my father? I’m afraid I wasn’t paying attention before this:
Calen shifts uncomfortably. “Actually sire, the one who slew the beast is the lad here. Aidan, son of Calen the fisherman.”
EDIT: Looks like he’s supposed to be called Brion.
wow i didn’t notice it 