The Chronicles of Hallarmuli (REVISED)

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The issue is fixed. Please feel free to continue to the end!

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Really enjoying the story so far, looking forward to reading more! :Dā€¦ you gotta love Vikings after all XD.

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I noticed that if you choose the,ā€œYes, my actions show that i am a good manā€ option, you actually become more evil (and vice versa with the ā€˜immoralā€™ option).

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Oh! Thanks for pointing that out. Do you remember which prologue you chose, 1 2 or 3 so I can change in that file <3

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Well, if you would do me the honor I came up for a present tense version, and I like it better. I will put the link below the first. They are different names so you will be able to tell. Let me know which one you like. Iā€™ll be editing it it ofc and making it flow better, but I donā€™t want to put in the work unless people like it yaā€™know.

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Prologue? I must have missed something, because I donā€™t know what you mean :sweat:

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Oh! xD So how I set it up is this is the Prologue right now. What you read is the Prologue. My files are labeled prologue one = throwing up, Prologue 2=stare Prologue 3= ignore your guiltā€¦ <3 sorry I didnā€™t make it clear.

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Ah, okay :slight_smile: I chose the throwing up one. I probably should have been able to work it out myself anyway, so thatā€™s all right.

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Hey yaā€™ll. Full Prologue up. Enjoy!!

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  • Is you father alive? Who even attacked the monastery?
    is your father
  • You are his older sibling, you must protect him.
    i choose sister
  • Edit:also:
    The next thing your know, a voice is calling to you, rough hands trying to shake you from your stupor. It is your sister
    i choose brother
  • He jolts back, blinking in suprise as an angry red line appears on hi face.
    his face
  • Your dagger i knocked from you had and his sword buries itself in your arm
    dagger is knocked
  • Dead beady eyes who stair blankly into the air.
    who stare blankly

And for the story it self,this make me canā€™t wait for what fate has stored for mc and mc brother/sisteršŸ˜ƒ

Thought maybe itā€™s better you add something at topic about the content :sweat_smile:

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I love the story so far and it seems very interesting from your description, but I donā€™t understand why you create so many scenes.

Instead of having 10 different scenes for every name and sibling combination, you could use $!{Name} and a sibling variable to do it in just one. Otherwise, it will become very difficult to look your code over and fix bugs.

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Love it so far! Looking forward to seeing more. :3

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Actually I only started having issues when I made it smaller, mostly just little things lost within the text or a space here or there that would get out of hand. Ok the end I just wrote everything back in by hand instead of copying and pasting it, so it was fine.

I could only make one name scene and honestly I probably will end up doing that. Most of the scenes are just for me to keep track of what is what.

Thanks, I hope enjoy the next update, should have it done around early to mid Feb.

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Thanks for pointing those out! I knew there were some, I was just too tired to go looking for them last night.
This makes my life much easier!

Hope you enjoy the next installment in Feb :3

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Ty! I look forward to writing it!

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Super engaging + interesting. I canā€™t wait to see where you go with this :slight_smile:

Minor errors ā€“ I choose to have a brother, but it says that my sister screamed my name. And also, even though I choose to be a girl, one of the slavers says ā€˜That man there belongs to me nowā€™ (which is reference to me, Iā€™m guessing?)

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Aha! I knew I missed one of those. Thanks for letting me know. Iā€™ll search for those. The MC was originally strictly male at one point so thatā€™s why it says that. It has evolved greatly from there. I hope you will continue to enjoy till the next installment!

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I got confused for a second there.

I was like ā€œThis seems familiar, but it canā€™t be. I remember this was different, so it must be another similar game.ā€

Then I scrolled up and dug deeper and it is indeed what I thought it was.

The last time I saw a prologue change that much was when that one WIP about ā€œfreaksā€ and a circus was updating. I forgot the name.

Anyway, I hope I can get a little revenge on dear old dad. Even pranking him would suffice.

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Whehehehe well, something happens to him letā€™s say you learn that, no deal was made :smiling_imp:

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Karma is a *beach. :yum: