When it’s my MC’s turn to speak his eulogy and he’s crying, tears flowing probaly his nose is running, he’s a mess while saying the might have beens between them,unrequited love, regret,Love.
And then BAM!! Alex appears in the middle of the room with that damn super speed of his, your teammates are speechless, you cry more as you walk slowly towards him and failing at the weak attempt of punching him so you hug him tight and cry against his shoulder.
But then again @deusvult might be right which I hope he’s/ she’s not
If Alex did that, that would be awful of him. Making the MC and co hurt over his death, staging a funeral, and then coming out like SURPRISE GOTCHA ALL
If anything, if Alex is trapped in the in-story equivalent of the speed force and assumed dead, that would also be interesting :))
Love this game so far. At one point, there’s a scene where a lady goes “Mr. Black will see you now,” and it cracked me up because all I could imagine was “Mr. Grey will see you now,” hahahahah. Keep up the great work!
Hey! I checked this wip by pure chance…and I loved it!
Especially because of the characters. They have very distinct personalities, all pretty interesting,all enjoyable,different but coherent. Also, the dialogues are great: they are fun but they also feel plausible,which is great and not at all simple.
What I enjoyed the most is how the reader get to know his/her comrade. The scenes make sense and they just go with the plot,without feeling separated, if you get what I mean
And the idea of influencing the past through the present is really fun,I hope the plot will rely at lest a bit on the choice made in the present time.
I don’t have any constructive criticism to give right now because I liked the game so much and I am completely smitten with it, but I can tell that this is the right road!
Dear author, I hope you will continue to find this project fun!
It’s never too late :)) the more the merrier? I’m just kinda waiting for class to end right now so I can go do fandom stuff
But yeah, I’m really excited for this game to update. Speculating right now what the other nightmares the team has and trying to make sense out of Damon’s
Sarah is the sexy sneaky sneaky blonde Lizzo Caplan. Ninja Warrior Jessie Graff can play her stunt double.
Kat is baby faced Maia Mitchell
Owen is the big buff Billy Brown, but maybe with a beard...
John is starey Wentworth Miller, but with longer hair like he thinks he's in a boy band so that he can swish it around when he's being moody and I can laugh at him.
Sarah: Elodie Yung
Kat: China Anne Mcclain
Owen: Nikolaj Coster-Waldau or Jensen ackles
John: Henry Cavill
Damon: Milo Ventimiglia
Alex: David Henrie
MC: Keiynan Lonsdale
