Tattooed Wings (WIP and Working Title)

Yep. Lol.

But then harry potter got rescued by hagrat

Hagrat? Really? :confused: HAGRID*

Here’s the link to the game new page

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/128296360/magic/web/mygame/index.html

YAY!!!

Haha update will be on hopefully before Christmas in a week maybe…?

Yay a Christmas update :-"

Hopefully, we will see, be nice to

Cool a Christmas update.

Yeah merry christmas to @JLBH

Really liking this so far, quite fast paced writing, but I consider that a positive factor… it will keep the reader (aka me interested!)

Lots of questions about Toshi Sora and about the player character.

Only thing I would say is to make sure that the player has a steady stream of information - it might only be a little bit, but I like to know that I am making progress towards solving the game/mystery

To repeat myself, really fun game, and I hope to read more

thanks trissi I have aimed for it to be fast based but after chapter one in chapter 2 it will slow down a lot explaining it as you finf your allies and your enemies

Hey guys,

As I said I hope to have an update by Christmas O:-)

Unfortunately I don’t think it will happen :-&

I have aimed myself to edit the first part if the story more description longer more scenes extc :-bd

Hope this is okay with you lot

JL

Please take you time, @JLBH. We’ll all be waiting. :smiley:

Thanks miki

No problem @JLBH :smiley:

Thanks aera

It’s fine I prefer a super awesome page then 10 really crappy pages.

Thanks beezle

Lol I think everyone does @Beezlebub and keep it up @JLBH I’m really excited.