When I started to play and using CJW’s ChoiceScript IDE I decided I wanted to try and write a game using it.
What I will show you is only a couple pages, as I haven’t got the time to advance on the story, but oh well.
The game tells the story of a young runaway striving to find their place in the world. You, as the main character of this story, will have to deal with your family issues, violence, drugs, mental disorders and, of course, love.
As I said, the story is still in an early state, but what I really want to know is: Is my writing good enough? And if it isn’t, how can I improve the writing so that no native English speaker will find it weird?
Pd: I didn’t include the stats page this time. Sorry!