On this forum we have a strict “No Demo, No Thread” policy for Work-In-Progress (WIP) game threads, which means that game threads without a demo must be posted in the Interest Check Thread. You’ll need to find a hosting site, such as @ dashingdon’s to use. Check out his thread for more info on that.
When you have a playable demo available for the public, you are more than welcome to make a thread for your game, but until then, discussing your game will have to be limited to the Interest Check thread, PM threads with other users, and as an example when asking about/discussing game design or writing.
If you’re having trouble with ChoiceScript, here is a thread with lots of helpful links for beginners, and there’s an entire category dedicated to helping people work through coding issues in ChoiceScript.