The game is really showing potential now! Its amazing how you improved it and built upon it but the one part I wanted to know more about is traveling around to Thailand and Africa and training in those places, very amazing man!! Love how this game is turning out <3, and alot more detail was added man great job! keep up the work!
Omega update along with *if error
I kinda feel like the game should build up to becoming a hero and learning martial arts, like you choose were you travel to and you learn martial arts there and depending on what type of martial arts you pick it ups your speed or intelligence. I don’t know just more introductory scene it went way to fast. But overall much improvement. And are you going to incorporate an intelligence stat? like the higher it is you notice little details that help you make decisions fighting baddies. Like maybe you infiltrate a bad guys base and you can choose to clump up to the roof or go through the unlocked back door but if you have high intelligence you notice a sniper on the roof of a building across the street that would see you if you tried to climb.
You have to be the good hero or is a posibility of be a antihero avenger who only thinks in kill bad guys and not in save the inocents
Error after to jump the page with the fridge and spoiler milk
Error: line 422: Illegal mixing of spaces and tabs; this line has a tab, but there were spaces on line 421
Scene: animal
@MaraJade I dont see the error and I was trying to create a chart for the stats like the Choice of Dragon but I dont know how.
No problem now maybe fix alone or i see a ghost
feedback is advised
Alpha (big) update
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/107554226/web/mygame/index.html
You remember it fondly.It was August 28, 1992.You were five, your mother was wearing he favorite blue velvet coat ,oh how you remember the gentle feel of it. He should be her and, after coat then space not other way around and space after the period
I will try this again and give feedback
. No, you were too young to put too and too together but you knew it was strange. Two and two not too and too also comma after together
It was only a matter of time it was all your fault their dead you suppose and this hurts more than the massacre itself. They’re not their, comma after dead
You saw the men eyeing your family since before you got out the car. No since just before, of between out and the car
. As you and your parents turned to get your the car in the dark, vast parking lot. Your or the not hoth
It sped up forward and you and your parents ran to through the parking lot almost pitch black but lit due to the small glow of the headlights. Should be ran through the almost pich black parking lot
. That’s when the gunshots happened the loud bangs kept going until The ski masked man stopped a womanly voice said “I saw them with a kid get him”. Comma after said, comma after happened, the ski masked man has no capitals on the the. And when not until.
. The man in the ski mask said in a scared tone “what ever let’s just get out of here before the police come, I just wanted to get them”. Comma after tone
. In the light was your dad beaten his body tore. Comma after dad, torn apart not tore
. You saw your mother her blue velvet covered by spots of dried blood from gunshot wounds. Comma after mother
All fixed! how is the game overall as in the flow and interest.