Poisoning the steel mind -a wip

On the hermaphrodite option the following text

"You follow the floating sphere of the holgram emitter, crossing through numerous corridors and rooms made out of raw plastisteel, they all start to blend together as though each room was part of the same eternal space. "

needs to be changed to

"You follow the floating sphere of the holgoram emitter, crossing through numerous corridors and rooms made out of raw plastisteel, they all start to blend together as though each room was part of the same eternal space. "

If the female option is selected and luring the bully into the energy field the following text

“You have more brains than the mutant pig and you attempt to draw him closer to the energy field. he catches you, your mind and body plunge into a black dream.”

needs to be changed to

“You have more brains than the mutant pig and you attempt to draw him closer to the energy field; he catches you and your mind and body plunge into a black dream.”

also the text

“So this is the rat brat you’re always talking about, Wolf? He passed the first test, but I don’t see anything special in him, but it’s your business anyway. I drugged the RR subject, making him unstable, so where is my…” he pauses as his brain chip notifies him of a payment received."

on the female option needs to be changed to say

“So this is the rat brat you’re always talking about, Wolf? She passed the first test, but I don’t see anything special in her, but it’s your business anyway. I drugged the RR subject, making him unstable, so where is my…” he pauses as his brain chip notifies him of a payment received.

thanks @Largejo and everyone for spot spelling and tab errors I cant see the tap space fight in the note pad

Oops, made a mistake on my part. Subtract two spaces on the feeling stressed button.

@Happy could you try now and if now works

Nope.

Just after meeting wolf- I got an error…
What were you doing when the error occured?

Error: line 26: Tabs and spaces appear on the same line
Scene: lab

  • Unfortunately I haven’t been able to continue pass this point, I’m unsure how the rest of the game plays…

yeah tab and spaces my greatest enemies in note I can’t see where are is like hunt invisible rabbits

Still a couple grammar errors.

yes i know is a alpha release have little patience with Mara ok you found a lot of bugs @Bagelthief

Always use spaces or always use tabs. :stuck_out_tongue:

yes @happy but I don’t have text editor so note put randomly tabs and I can’t see them so is a long tab hunting.
Also why no commented in my fan fiction game only a little mission 100 ways to kill Emma is a funny theme to chat

hows game

It’s not dead I got new scenes ready offline but I need to learn to code better to track the almost infinite track of variables 3 separate paths with subpaths and diferent storyline to woman, perks.
I m learning writing a small fan fic about zombie exodus who will have his demo this weekend.
Then I return more confident here.
It will be a long game!!

EPIC

thanks @kaosorer im doing more scenes today I finish one I hope update it soon.

Lol, emma destroyed the world

@RoseQueenKamijo ejem are you sure you are dead for ever? a scientific corporation will use your body to experiment so it will be hermaphrodite path in the final game. but I have three paths completely diferent with separate story for genders even the hair color is a part of game important so It will a LONG game no less than 2 years of development because will be really longer than COG games and I’m not native so edit is needed
so this will be a long process and until first part of game 10 chapters will end I don’t start the herm path so yes for now you are dead :-))

Ah ok ^^ @Marajade

The theme is beautifully dark. Although there was some grammar issues I was very impressed with the world you created.