Thank you!
please no one use the last link please no work.
the only official link it’s in the first post and now here
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/95587456/Mara%20SDK/index.html
Just started. loving the whole story/theme, it is a shame about the whole “ill spoken English hurdle” but I wouldn’t let a comment like this hold you back,as in a whole, the game has a lot of potential. It also mite be because its late here(it looked cool) but the red on black didn’t do any favours for my eyes… But you have piqued my interest
@DreamWalker thanks and a update is coming I love see your feedback and don’t dream walking!
Update
First I want to thanks Largejo, 2ton and Alex Cosarca for all their support without them I got no demo
Second I need you guys try all the options include the woman please try.
I need all your feedback so don’t be shy!!
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/132064397/Mara2/Mara%20SDK/mygame/index.html
I got an Indention error when I picked- feeling stressed 'bout the test button as a “Woman”. I think you need one more tab or two more spaces.
thanks @Happy code without text editor is a real nightmare I try to fix it.
Only just started rereading. Don’t have anything on hand to write in so I’m just going to post as I read(may take some time as I’m trying to multi task…) 4567AC is far from the utopia that all the philosophers and wise men of the past (themselves now almost forgotten) “has preficted”- think it should be- “had predicted” Also the next button at bottom seems to be blank, just a box until you press it, and it flashes next before going to the next page
consumption is obligatory" says a monotoned holo voice, whilst it “subjects” the assembled group to the standard community school- should be “directs”
Also, got an error as a guy while talking to the empress, it said you used both spaces and tabs in the same line, should only be tabs.
I don’t understand you @DreamWalker remember I am no native I have to change subjects for directs?
also thanks for your help!! is really useful and what fo you think about the game itself grammar appart and the music?
damn note programme how I wish if I had a text editor snff why I can’t have a text editor in my iPhone ? X(
Lol all good, but yes change " subjects for directs" and as in the previous note “has preficted”- change to “had predicted”. I’m not the best with English(failed it in school) so if I’m wrong please do correct me people. But I am still liking the some what harsh, yet beautiful theme 
Ok, so I’ve come across a few more grammar errors, but I don’t think me pointing out everyone at the moment is going to help anyone, so I’m going to miss them out in the mean time and forward the problems and suggestions and maybe come back to them at a later date?
@DreamWalker point the grammar errors is really important to me so I thank you and I glad you like it.
you can point or chat here when you desires Everyone is welcome here
I get an error 404…
@RVallant try the new link some post up works fine for me
I’m getting a “tabs and spaces error” when trying to go into the first part of “the dream” section; I can also see a few spelling errors that I missed, i’ll keep playing and post them as I find them.
The text below
"4567AC is far from the utopia that all the philosophers and wise men of the past (themselves now almost forgotten) has preficted; there was no fast than light travel and all the Artificial Intelligences had been destroyed in World War IV some 200 years previously. "
needs to be changed to this
"4567AC is far from the utopia that all the philosophers and wise men of the past (themselves now almost forgotten) had predicted; there was no faster than light travel and all the Artificial Intelligences had been destroyed in World War IV some 200 years previously. "
although I believe @Dreamwalker may have already mentioned this.
“You observe the lead coloured anti-radiation shroud, forming the sky that covers all of Pangea’s surface, Panega, the only continent that survives, a place made entirely by the artifice of man.”
needs to be changed to
“You observe the lead coloured anti-radiation shroud, forming the sky that covers all of Pangea’s surface; Pangea, the only continent that survives, a place made entirely by the artifice of man.”