Hmm, I see your point. After checking the powers on your list, everything seems to have a potentially good amount of destructive power, but only a few have any subtlety within them.
There is enough text to make into a demo, mainly before you crash land onto the fantasy world. Here, have little fun with creating character, I would also appreciate it if you people would point out error in plot, grammar and coding for me.
I am relatively new to this so please tell me what I did wrong. I am new to dropbox as well, so if the link does work, tell me.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/zkcf53zm4mbymd3/Overpower.html?dl=0
I like the demo! And this powers is so destructive! Muahahahahaha i will become a god!!!
Elves will fight against me? Please let the slaughter begin!!!
Any errors you encounter?
I am so evil! I canot control all my evil!!! Roooooaaaaaaaaaaar!!! I will devour everything!!! Hysterycally laugh.
Nothing! everything for me is ok.
The game seems to be fine technically, so far.
I found many small typos, but other than that it looks solid.
This game kinda reminds me of a book that I read a few months ago where the main character had godlike powers, but when the world became too chaotic, he always ended up being thrown into another dimension to avoid tearing the fabric of space and time apart.
It’s a quite nice idea, and the demo is promising.
There’s only one thing that jumped right at me: If you choose to shoot lightning, then you get this “Now you understand, you have the power. Power to manipulate electricity, no not only electricity, but also gravity and atom, the universe basic
component which form from electron, proton and newton, all of which is electricity.” This sounds more like energy manipulation, than manipulating electricity.
True, the power to manipulate electricity is basically the power of manipulating electrons.
Energy != Electricity
What’s the radius on this time stop ability?
@Shoelip 5 minutes, trust me, the damage you can do within 5 minutes is more than you think.
I like mater manipulation, what the fifth power will be?
Radius, not duration.
Ah sorry, radius the whole planet, though only one at the time.
Huh… Does it slow the movement/rotation of the planet?
No, stop it. Like a sphere that cover the whole planet, anything within the planet will stop for 5 minutes including the planet rotation, within this 5 minutes it your world. The moon and other ships in space will not be affect if they are far enough from orbit though.
that would be bad if that happend. our planet spins at about 800km an hour, so if that where too stop. everything would be trown sideways at 800km.
you, everthing around you, the air and everything effected by the air
I want to raise an army to conquer the world! Like Sauron, i know this is not a dark lord game but with so much power! Like Sauron i cannot enslave orcs or some races to be my legions?