I don’t think this should be capitalized
Also:
Any idea how to unlock this one?
Edit:
MC needs to be traumatized to unlock that.
Wrong word here:
Misspelled words
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Ah thank you! I’ll make some edits when I get home!
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I started reading again yesterday and I cried. The MCs sufffering is too real. Nobody helped that poor baby. 
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Just to make you aware, Dashingdon hosting will be closing soon so I would recommend moving this to cogdemos or uploading a compiled html file:
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I was exploring the cheat menu and when i tried to adjust the reclusive stat, it would refuse to accept any number above 50
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Hi, does anyone have new link for the demo? Or that the author haven’t aware about dashingdon yet?
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Its on the cogdemos site infact i think its currently on its first page.
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It is already posted on CoGDemos, I have added a link to it on the main post! 
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Found the same bug even if I choose the different option still got the same result as the image shown here
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I tried all three options and got that bug myself.
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@BlueShayde, @Knoez, @Clover667, @icyLucy
Sorry for the wait! It should be fixed now, but the later part of the demo has a lot of unfinished content; I am still adding and rewriting things. I went over the first part of the prologue again, adding small things and plan to do more, so stay tuned!
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I don’t know why I skipped over this game originally, but I’ve played it now, and I’m glad I did. It’s awesome! Looking for more.
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Hey! 
I have seen you around the forms and am glad you tried my IF and enjoyed it!
It needs a lot of work and I have such little time these days but I try my best whenever I have the chance to sit down and write.
I hope to add so much more and hear everyones thoughts! 
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I haven’t checked updates but following this from when I saw it first time.
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All three responses lead to this error when you try to advance to the next page: “ chapter1_act-2 line 839: invalid indent, expected at least one line in ‘if’ true block”
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Oh also lots of your/you’re typos and at one point you use the word “discreet” when you meant “deceit.” Hope this helps!
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Pretty good stuff here so far. Some minor grammar and pronoun errors here and there though and a bug that stops me from continuing. I’ll put it all below.
Summary
all the “it’s” here should be its and this is the case when this section is repeated later on too
others
from others whenever they could manage
they watch the rat fling itself desperately up towards
subside
no “the” here
what remained of her fire from breakfast and took no “she” here a while to dry off.
she made no complaints
or
at
much about its past, from the fragments she’s pieced together
who roam its streets
have the gall to yell
she didn’t know what exactly
its
out of all the
was as sad no “him” here like they are
sights and sounds around her
there shouldn’t be an exclamation point here before “she”
kept her body low, trying to avoid detection from the people around her
as fast as her little feet could carry her
confident
It’s not letting me upload any more photos 
so I’ll continue below
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