What are your thoughts on three inner and outer personalities of MC? Did you notice them? I assume these are the fire, water, wind and then sacrifice? I liked the concept but found that even if I chose wind, it assigned water to me, and my snake sacrifice was rejected. I had to go with the vole to get it to work?[/quote]
It isn’t simple as first seems. But in time I’ll change up so “hints” are more noticable.
*Flames from candles grow taller/Fire/Snake
*Water in the bowl started to shake/Earth/Hare/Rabbit
*From nowhere a gust of wet wind blow/Water/ Vol
*Leafs, from dried up herbs, fell down/Air/Hen
Alright, I’ll emphasize more that the witch is named.
5. If you looked, how did you like my code? Any suggestions? Thank you for playing and answering! I’m a novice (new) coder myself so I won’t be of help here. You might even teach me a thing or two for use in my own story. lol.[/quote]
I remember when I first started coding in “choicescript”. It was a nightmare. Only later one I found out how to see other people games codes and that helped me a lot. If I liked some nifty feature in their games I could find out how they did it. That is the way I decided help out and show my code. Plus, show off my way of organizing code with color. It helped me a lot. Less of a mess and easier to find mistakes in code.
The pacing of the story was good overall, although you might have stretched out a couple of the scenes in chapter one. The background material on everyone involved seemed almost non-existent. You and I are on opposite extremes lol.[/quote]
In the beginning emphasize is on the contract. This isn’t first or last summoning for the MC. MV is like a pica delivery guy. He takes the call, writes dawn the order and then delivers. Right now he has no need to know background knowledge why someone ordered pepperoni and how they got the money. He’s interested only in address and money.
But I might change up something in the future.
Thanks for feedback!!