So I’ve been writing a story like this for a long time. Sadly, recent events that have royally messed up my laptop have kept me from continuing said story, which broke my heart. So upon discovering choicescript, I decided my story would be reborn as Dark Matter | A Summoner’s Choice, for everyone to enjoy. The original story this is based off of is very close to how I plan on writing this. In the story, a young girl is pulled into a magical world where she finds out she has the power of summoning. The reason she discovers this world now is because demons have been hunting the magic kind for generations, but just recently the number of deaths due to demons has been on the rise. She is among the influx of many students entering a special academy to teach them about their magic history and to protect them from having their souls stolen.
Here is the full synopsis for the game:
You play as a young girl from Victorian England who finds herself drawn into a world full of magic and comes to discover that she is long lost royalty. Attend a school full of other magic youths like yourself, meet new friends, find romance, become the best summoner the school has ever seen.
However, all is not well with your school and your kind. The reason the magic royalty, the ancestors of those who once ruled a thriving kingdom in another realm, live in such seclusion is because demons are after their delectable souls, that have the ability to prolong life. Some of these demons have somehow found their way into the school, and your classmates and your own life are at stake. Can you stop this murdering spree before it is to late?
And so far I’ve completed the first scene, which is primarily the prologue and a way for you to set up your stats.
You can test it out here: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/126603009/web/mygame/index.html
I need some help with grammar and I need some people who are willing to go around and test my choices to make sure I have no errors. So if you want to help me out, it would be greatly appreciated.