Choose your story game


#1

I just started working on this choose your story game called fallen its about a fallen angel losing his memories and he tries to figure out who he is and why he was casted out of heaven. So if anyone is interested i could give you a link and you could give me some suggestions and opinions of it. I just started it so its not very long yet and English isn’t my best language so there are probably going to be some grammar issues.


#2

me


#3

Ill try it.


#4

I want to try it


#5

I want to


#6

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/fallen Here is the link to it still a very early wip but i should at least get a good amount done by the end of tomorrow.
Right now im just trying to get as much done so there’s probably going to be a lot of grammar mistakes .


#7

Best couple pages in a story ever


#8

Thinking of giving the mc a familiar he can summon so what sounds better for a demonic fallen angel a Black dragon or a hell hound.


#9

Hell hound vs Dragon…I LOVE DRAGONS!


#10

Guess ill go with dragon would be interesting.


#11

Maybe the dragon/hell hound can lead us in our dreams?


#12

Just updated it with some info on dragons should i add something more or is it good as it is


#13

Hell hound I love them for there brutality


#14

can i try it?


#15

if he is a fallen angel i think hiss familiar should be something of the light side or that originaly was but fell with him


#16

i know a lot about angels and from what i know, 6 winged angels are called Seraphim and are the highest rank amongst angels .


#17

He used 8 wings


#18

been busy lately due to school starting soon but i will get back to writing sometime today or tomorrow.


#19

I can wait(I think we might make the war end)


#20

Okay finally finished all the crap i had to do irl and will start working on it again first thing tomorrow well if i don’t get lazy. So Asuna love interest yes or no? Not sure how to proceed with her character.