I Have done a major rewrite of the first 2 chapters. I decided that I needed to add more details to the beginning and I wrote a more detailed outline of the story so I had to change somethings. Please leave comment, suggestions, tips, ideas. I love getting feedback
--------> The New Rewrite Demo Chapter 1 and 2 —>https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/q0t1r9dc2h2kn6c/Mages%20Tale(2).html?dl=0
MC is taken to a world of magic where they learn that they are a mage. They set out on an adventure to discover and learn more about the magic and the new world. I don’t want to give too much away more details will come with more chapters.
Elis - Mage teacher
Carly - MC’s Bestfriend
Taria - Elf Archer
Talio - Elf Mage
Riley - Swordsman
King Lan - Dark King
Queen Lan - Dark Queen
Brog - Dark Mage
Zig - Swordsman (leader of Lan’s Army)
Let me know if there are any questions. Check Back for more added scenes.