I Have done a major rewrite of the first 2 chapters. I decided that I needed to add more details to the beginning and I wrote a more detailed outline of the story so I had to change somethings. Please leave comment, suggestions, tips, ideas. I love getting feedback
Basic Plot:
MC is taken to a world of magic where they learn that they are a mage. They set out on an adventure to discover and learn more about the magic and the new world. I don’t want to give too much away more details will come with more chapters.
Seems like a really good concept, will the best friend be a romance option? There’s some grammar mistakes such as issues with capitalization (things that don’t need to be capitalized are capitalized, the beginning of sentences lack capitalization), odd comma placement, and a couple of spelling errors. Keep up the good work much success!
“what are you?” you tell me this is your dream “this is some wierd dream” (this is what I get for having sugar before bed) Well you still cant sleep here so get moving buddy. “Where are we anyway?” your really dull are’nt you this is still your dream where do you think you are? You look around and the place where you are reminds you of your town. What kind of town do you live in?
Thanks I will do some more proof reading … I was thinking about
including the Bestfriend as a romance option , thinking about how to work
it into the story because the bestfriend is part of the plotline. They get
taken by the villain which is the prompt for the make character going after
the villain.
Magic, something most people don’t believe in,
but wether they believe or not there is a place where it exists.
A place where there is magic, mystery, and adventure.
A place where humans are not the only inhabitants.
A place filled with creatures people wish they could see
and monsters people never want to see.