I have started, but the doubt paralyses me. I dont know if the intro works, It is raw, but if somebody can give me some feedback, I can found the way.
The trial of fate
Mossy moisture covers your paralysed body like a shroud. A strange sensation you do not notice that your lungs expand or contract anything. Not even steam comes from your lips, dry and dark like cherries in conserve.
Am I dead?
You try to speak, but none of your facial muscles or dry tongue moves a millimetre. You are lost in the cold embrace of death.
*page_break You hear voices beyond your humid confinement.
“What are we going to do with trapped vampires?” The voice is dry and cutting masculine smells of fright and Vetiver by Guerlain shaving cream.
That ad has always struck you between lustful Hollywood geriatric I and those bombastic descriptions… “Vetiver, oakmoss and tobacco that clearly mark the scent as masculine.”
“Imagine the old pub song from your old Ireland.” The other voice is soft but piercing and tired. Probably female.
“Very funny, we are not in old Ireland or in the Vatican. We are in damn Nebraska. We’re not even sure they’re vampires.”
“Shh!”
“Not, Shh me!” You know perfectly well that they have passed the test of the sun. The Vetiver man pouts like a brat cat.
"That does not mean anything. There have been a few cases of some hybrids. " The voice is now stronger loading the tone in the vowels as if they were daggers.
“How many so-called sons of the sun have you seen in your twenty years as a Templar? One?” The hostility of the tone is clearly hostile. Even.
Sigh. “You know perfectly well that none. No one has seen one of those children of the sun in two thousand years. But there is evidence…”
“We are the main hunter cell in the area. If we haven’t seen them, nobody has. That thing about vampires who see the sun is a hoax.”
The conversation continues its symphony in a fussy tone, like a hoarse and poorly tuned drum and tambourine. And that distinctive aftershave smell and something else like iron or blood calling you. Strange.
The voices come closer, ceasing to be quiet whispers, turning into a loud conversation full of perfume, sweat and humidity. They have to be very near your resting place.
"As you say. At the end of the day, they are locked in a crypt protected by runes; whatever they are, they will not be able to move until the master. "
The sound of a funeral march coming out of a cheap cell phone fell the voices that separate with a silence only broken by echoing footsteps and the tune from hell.
You let the humidity and the silence cradle you, Immobile you can only try to remember Who am I?
*fake_choice
#“A car, and lot of glamour and cameras around me:”
#“I see an school and angry bullies around me.”