I think this is the start of a really good game if the rest of its like the demo. Well done. Can’t wait to play more
Great demo =D>
great demo.Although Picking a preset name makes me surnameless
ps.
I was looking for a bow and arrow weapon since you mentioned it. But still, can’t wait for more
you know if you get a little better at coding and polish the story a bit more this game can be one of the best
It’s very interesting and I’ve always wanted a kingdom ruling game. People have tried before but they stop halfway.
Tried it very good. I can’t wait for the rest of the game.
I enjoy a good rule the kingdom story. I don’t know if any of you played the Summoner 2 on the PS2 but it was a great little story where not only were you a goddess reborn, but also queen. Lots of great ruling decisions ensued. This has alot of potential to be awesome 
One small note:
‘The other warriors find relying on their fists foolish so they defer to their own preferred variety of weapon. If only they realized how much more unique it could make them. Unforuantley fighting with your hands has made you more vulnerable to attacks by actual weapons. But at least there is no weight from weapons to slow you down.’
Unfortunately*
Plus the choice of only using your hands to be honest. 
Everyone knows that the most dangerous soldier is the one that doesn’t need a weapon to kill you. What are they going to do? Disarm you?
… Well now that I think of it…
Lol.
Cut off your arms/hands?
intresting game ^_- looking forward to more rawr
I NEEED more.
Sorry I’ve been away so much guys school has been stressful this year 
Anyway I started the next chapter introducing some info on the other countries and your council of advisors.
Is it up in demo
Please tell me it is…
Sadly no it’s not probably won’t be for another week or so I’m being swamped with finals and a research paper but they will be over soon so hang in there guys
Still quite a few typos and grammar errors. The plot seems slightly interesting, although it feels like it could be fleshed out a little more. The last page was quite long and might benefit from at least one paragraph break for less scrolling. Still pretty nice game for such a short intro.
I would love to send you an email with all your grammar mistakes and some suggestions for improving sentences, if you wouldn’t be insulted. And if I knew your email.
Okay carnt wait until it is
@Smeet I wouldn’t mind I suck at grammar
Choiceofmanning@outlook.com