Hey guys so there were problems with chosen it just didnt turn out right sadly
But good news is it inspired a new similar story called Kingdom Come.
Has some of the same concepts but more defined.
You live in a world where there is only one Continent surrounded by several island in the Mystique Sea. That continent is called Terra and it is currently split into 3 major kingdoms 4 if you count the small central kingdom that you live in. Terra is a place of amazement and beauty anywhere you go from the mountains to the forests Terra is covered in beauty. Until Recently Terra has been at peace thanks to a long standing Treaty between Kingsoms called the Triage Peace Agreement. For over 250 years this agreement has kept all of Terra and its people at peace. But now the kingdoms have decided to break that peace. A series of unfortunate events have passed that have led each kingdom to war. The Terranian kingdom that is compromised of Terra’s first beings (Humans) resides in the cities north of Terra. The Mt. Stone kingdom (Dwarves) resides in the mountains South of Terra. The Were-Clans (Were-Bears) reside in the Forests of West of Terra. Currently Terra is entering into an Age of Industrial Revolution. This new age has brought with it inventions of new weapons and with these new weapons comes pride and greed into the hearts of the leaders of Terra. Terra’s leaders have gotten so out of control that their deeds have escalated the world into war. The Dwarf King , King Stone has stolen the human princess Solar Avalon from King Storn Avalon to be his bride. In turn The Were-Clan leader King Oso has taken prisoners from the Dwarven kingdom and has tortured them. King Storn has encroached upon The Were Clans Territory cutting down parts of their Forests for lumber without consent reacted hostily to the inhabitants of these Forests.
You are the son of the ruler of the small kingdom caught in the middle of this civil war for Terra. (You get to name your Kingdom). Your Kingdom has always been at peace with the others and is the only center complerte cultural diversity. Humans, Dwarves, and Werebears live alongside each other and support each other. At the beginning of the war your kingdom was threatend to break apart. Every kingdom calling on their respective people to join the war agaisnt the other races. But in the end Your people stayed loyal to your kingdom, and your father the ruler decided to keep his kingdom neutral while the war was going on. Many ambassadors have come from each kingdom to persuade your father to jettison his neutrality and join their side. But your Father has decided to stay out of it. Even when King Storn himself came to talk to him directly he refused to budge. When it became clear that negoiations would not work now the kings have tried force. Deciding to take over your kingdom with the rest of terra. Your army although small is certainly not weak and having a strong diversity of races in the army has only made it stronger. The Kings from each kingdom have only sent small groups of soilders to attack in order to avoid taking troops away from the main war being raged agaisnt the other kingdoms. Even so more and more of the innocent people of your kingdom die everyday from raids on towns and military camps and your people grow weary of fighting agaisnt their own brethern. Deserters are becoming more and more common. You must do something to save your Kingdom and all of Terra.
The story goes slighty more in depth than this but this is overall outline of the story. I dont want to give away too much but based on the works of others I can tell you that the coding for my story will very diffrent from others. Therefore changing the usual playability. like for instamce insead of there multiple points to seduce a several romantic options you will have to pick one person as a romantic option for your life your MC will fall in love with that person and styay with them forever so be careful who you chose. but on the upside I will allow to customize certain qualites of them to your liking. just a few examples on the diffrent kind of playability your used to.
So if you survived this terribly long post and read everything above I would love your feedback as well as some of your ideas for the story as well. Also i really need help with a better name for the were-bears. Somethig cooler but that also explains that they are half human half bear still. And the another name for their kingdom as well would be helpful.
Thnaks and please give me feedback and comment on what you think and give me a few ideas if you have any you want to share.