@Andarax_Kode I love Wayhaven Chronicles and Golden, I’m sure I’ll love reading this too :blush:

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I love mystery games so I’m looking forward to the demo

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I have to tentative “yes” you on this, because I’m the dude who keeps turning Morgan down for sex because he wants something more.
Would the romance be predicated in that initial sexual attraction?

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To me, that sounds amazing. I would love to play a game like that.

It’s important, of course, to let the player know what to expect, so expectations are built accordingly :slight_smile:

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That’s pretty much how I try to play every romance, if at all possible, since I’m cupioromantic. Though generally with the understanding that we’re not exclusive, if that’s an option…

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Soft sci-fi, but reasonably researched.
You play a robot. Your gender is widely customizable, including agender/genderless. Your appearance can be customized. Your body can be as humanlike or as unhumanlike as you want, in form and function, including the option to be a robot dragon.
There are dragons. They’re friendly. There are dragon ROs.
There are also human ROs. There are poly routes.
Story involves space travel but is more…“literary sci-fi” than space opera. Primary focus is on exploring what it means to be sapient, discovering yourself, making friends, navigating diversity, and seeing one or two weird alien planets.

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Hello everyone! I’ve been working on several stories, but I found one that really resonates with me.

Some of the main concepts of this story were the result of me going “hey, this concept I have for one story is boring by itself. Same goes for the other. Why don’t I just try to combine them?” As a result, Corpse Reviver was born.

Corpse Reviver is essentially an angsty revenge story where you play as a morally ambiguous character titled ‘The Angel’ who roams the land with their brother, The Devil. It will be a dark fantasy game with a mix of modern and medieval themes. I may also incorporate a smidge of futuristic elements (because every time I play FFXIV and I see the regalia mount I cry a little on the inside and get inspired).

Synopsis

The story takes place in Eldris, a world where it’s natural inhabitants are forced to coexist with entities called Lifelines and Binders. These entities suddenly appeared after Nephilim’s wrath and are fabricated with an essence, yora, which seems to flow through all things living. They’re on the constant search for humans who are ideal vessels for storing the same essence they are made of… and most of the time, this symbiotic relationship is unwarranted. They’ll do whatever it takes to survive while on conquest for self preservation.

You and your brother are an anomaly in this world. The day you regained consciousness was the day you were quick to realize the powers you both possess. While you are an immortal basin of essence and healing, your brother is less than mortal. He is a corpse in constant need of essence to function, but he also needs it to amass power beyond what any creature in Eldris should be capable of. The two of you make a dangerous pair, seeing as how you are an infinite generator of essence and he is an immense user of it. Will that power go to your head?

With fractured memories and a strong feeling you lost something, the two of you set out to discover where you are and what happened to you.

However, lots of eyes are aimed at you and your brother ever since your reawakening, precious vessel.

Notable Characters

[ Daemin Ryder ] Brother, The Devil - Male [NPC]
Your brother. He is almost always brooding and he’s an extreme misanthropist. However, his feelings are quite the opposite when it comes to his kin. His familial passion for his kin prevails through his hatred.

[ Lunaris Pyan ] The Exiled Moon - Female [RO]
The sister of Ashuri Pyan. She is steadfast, sisterly, and always on the search for redemption in the hopes of being accepted back into her homeland. The name Ashuri rolls off her tongue like a hissing snake.

[ Remilia Mhova ] The Royal Huntress - Female [RO]
A Royal Huntress who is looking to snuff out her prey. She is domineering, professional, and violent with her catch. If something will benefit her people, she is more than willing to bend her morals to achieve it.

[ Fenris Alphenstein ] The Unhowling Wolf - Male [RO]
A traveling mercenary who is mute. He is humble, independent, and an excellent performer of the arts and literature. He has recently began his travel alongside Remilia and Cava’dren.

[ Sorin Laigar ] The Phoenix - Male [RO]
The man who has an obsession with collecting tokens of gratitude. He is constantly at work, wise, and stoic to the bone.

[ Eve ] The Arbiter’s Shade - Male or Female [RO]
A wandering soul who is seen, but never found. They are cunning, aloof, and passive upon most situations. Why do they stare like they know you and Devil?

[ Yonas/Yubiri Cava’dren ] The Floating Lotus - Female or Male [RO]
A freeloader until their end. They are quite relaxed, perceptive, and full of banter. It is a mystery how Remilia hasn’t kicked them out of their group yet.

[ Crych ] The Fox Hawk - Nonbinary [RO]
A person well accustomed to the wilds. They are skittish, resourceful, and a good listener. Get too close, and they may just snap at you. Are those fluffy fox like ears I see?

[ Melodious ] Melancholy Melody - [ NPC]
A strange Lifeline that seems content with taking the bare minimum of essence from you. They keep humming a sad tune…

[ Ashuri Pyan ] The Mocking Sun - Female [NPC]
The sister of Lunaris Pyan. She is well equipped with her words, playful, mocking, and clear with her motives. Underneath her extravagant nature lies something more.

And more notable characters to come…

Planned Features
  • Play as a man, woman, or nonbinary individual.
  • Seven confirmed romance options. Depending on how things go, there may be one or two more further down the line of development.
  • Will you be merciless, or will you show compassion? You may even influence or prevent the death of someone by your brother’s hand.
  • Fight humans, Binders, Lifelines, and whatever wants to pick a fight with you.
  • Find your method of combat: do you prefer to fabricate weapons into existence, manipulate essence to fight, or transform into an entity made for combat? Or do you use all three methods?
  • Share your feelings with a melancholic Lifeline, Melodious.
  • Make fun of your edgy brother. Embarrass him.
  • Possibly more features to come…

Corpse Reviver has a :point_right: Tumblr :point_left: where I will be posting progress, art, or answering any asks if I receive any! Thank you for taking the time to review this. :blush: I would love to know what you think.

Also, I have created some official artwork of two characters already, Devil and Ashuri. I plan to draw on the side to balance out my time spent writing for the story. Don’t want to burn myself out!

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@Yachire Sounds interesting. Can’t wait to read the demo.

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holy shit that sounds fucking cool. the art is fantastic. i love the design. i already love the brother. its nice take a step back from being a badass with cool powers and take a more passive role. i already dig it. i cant wait to read the demo. got me pumped up. how modern are we in on the story? like are phones and guns already invented? i assume that even if were still immortal, we’ll still feel pain? how fast can we heal ourselves and others? i can already smell the disapproval towards whomever we will romance. immediate protective brother mode activated. did i say how i absolutely love ur art? my god is it gorgeous. another question i notice from ur artwork, does the mc and daemin have only one wing? i thought it was just of the angle but from ur timelapse, it seems not. are they ably to fly?

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Thank you so much! An early thought of mine was letting the player decide whether or not they wanted to play the power role of Devil or the immortality role of Angel. However, I realized it would have complications down the line in terms of character building, so I opted to throw a curve ball by making MC stay as an immortal with regenerative/healing properties instead of the other way around.

And yes, even though MC is immortal, they still feel every ounce of pain. Chopped off limb? It will grow back in time, but it will hurt like…well, like your limb got chopped off. Meanwhile, your brother is fine and dandy depending on the amount of yora essence he has. As for healing yourself and others, the efficiency and toll you will pay is dependent on how much you use it…I think I will reveal more about this at a later date since I don’t want to accidentally give too much yet when I haven’t finished the WIP demo! :rofl:

In terms of guns, phones, and other forms of technology, they have been invented and there are a select few areas that are more technologically advanced compared to others. A good comparison would be Final Fantasy, pretty much.

In the artwork, yes they only have one wing. Initially, I gave Daemin two branches of wings in his first artwork I made for him.

devil2

But later on as I was redrawing his design, I thought it would be interesting if MC and Daemin only had one wing. They can use it to sort of lift themselves higher off the ground compared to a jump, but otherwise they can’t fly by themselves. There’s a good reason why they only have one branch of wing each…:blush:

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Is this because of a yin-yang thing where they’re two halves of the same thing and only work properly when combined together?

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Something of the likes of that~ :grin:

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Don’t tease me I already wanna read the demo :face_with_peeking_eye:

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How do people feel about the non-chronologically flowing stories? Most, if not all, IFs I’ve seen are written in a chronological manner, often with only bits and pieces of past events included every now and then.

Would an IF with a lot of retrospection (mixed with the present events in a logical way) be not received too well? I’m wondering if the people are just not writing many of such IFs or whether they’re less digestible for readers (IFs, not the people).

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I’m assuming it would depend on how followable it would be. A confusing story is confusing, and probably wouldn’t be received well, but if it’d not be confusing, I don’t see why not.

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Hello! I’m a long-time lurker who loves CYOA stories and is considering making one. Here are some ideas and details I’ve considered the past few months:

  • IDEA ONE: In a typical “high-magic” fantasy setting, where dragons, kings, and magic exist, you are the parent of the prophesied Chosen One! Although you don’t really have any remarkable talent of your own, your choices and approach to parenting will play a huge part in shaping the future and character of your precious child.
    • Plot idea: Perhaps the prophecy deals with a threat to the world- a reincarnation of an evil deity. What if fate keeps suggesting that your child might grow to be the ultimate villain? How would you prevent that?
    • Plot idea: What if your child suffered a severe injury at an early age, or was born with a disability? Could a blind child still become a hero? Could a child with one arm still wield a sword?
    • Plot idea: What if you have two children? Is one clearly destined to be the Chosen One? If so, what about the other?
  • IDEA TWO: You are the king/queen of a large, powerful kingdom, with many lovely children (and some not-so-lovely children). The only problem is, you are literally months away from dying of old age/sickness. How will you prepare the kingdom for your successor?
    • Plot idea: Your eldest children are identical twins who refuse to rule without the other. How will you deal with succession?
    • Plot idea: Surprise, your spouse is evil and blatantly plotting you/your children’s demise. How do you protect what is most precious to you?
  • IDEA THREE: The cycle of reincarnation, life, and death is broken as your universe suddenly merges with a nearly identical alternate universe. You and two of your four siblings are supposed to be dead, killed in a giant earthquake. Instead, you now wake up to a universe where a different “you” and your two siblings survived. In fact, everyone who died in one universe is alive in the other, and vice versa. How is the world supposed to function when there’s two versions of everyone- dead and alive?

What are some of your thoughts on these ideas?

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Idea 2 seems to be interesting.

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I like both 1 and 2. Not sure I actually understand 3.

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This one is a bit in its infantile stages, but I’ll share what I’ve got.

Working Title

Shade Soul

Summary

Ever since your birth, you’ve been bound to a Shade that acts as your guardian. Befriend or learn to control the Shade while uncovering its origins, its relation to the cultist hunting you, and satisfying its own dark hunger.

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Interesting premise! I’d love to see more details about it. I know that your idea is still in the making, but here are some questions I think many would have:

Is a Shade something everyone has or only select people? Why are there cultists hunting you (or are they simply Shade Hunters in general)? What dark hunger does a Shade possess? Is it a physical hunger or something else taboo?