Heart Lines is a mostly just-for-fun WIP set in a pseudo-Victorian/low magic society, with the occasional tiny bit of steampunk thrown in. I don’t want to spoil anything, so I can’t say much, but the basic gist of the plot is someone made an unwise deal with some very powerful beings and it all rebounded on the MC.
I’m learning ChoiceScript as I go, so this will probably change a great deal over time-hopefully for the better. The demo is very short, only a bit over 4000 words, but I’ll be out of town next week and expect my computer to be out of commission for a little bit. I will probably be able to work on it when I’m out of town, and I have other ways than my computer to work on it, but it’ll be more of a hassle and knowing that I have the demo posted is a good way to keep me motivated.
So, without further ado,
Please let me know about any errors, typos, etc. Pretty much if anything is incorrect, or you think it could be done better, let me know.