God Syndicate (WIP) - 90k

Billie is just a demigod. He’s Jackie’s actual son.

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The Ares we play is an amnesiac, completely delusional, and one that’s forgotten who they even are. Ares must’ve gone full kaput if their memories(?) don’t transfer over. Ares and our character seem to be separate beings due to bold text and ours being italics.

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this was actually really good lols

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Right, I read him as like a Hercules type. Or for the video gamers, Kratos, able to challenge the Gods but not one himself (at least not yet lol).

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I was hoping Billie was a Ro cause that would be such an f you to Jackie.

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I mean she DID raise Franco as a son too

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Aaaand noted :purple_heart:

Now, how else can I maybe make Jackie’s life difficult??

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Treating it as nothing more then a job, not family, would probably get under her skin. Also refusing to believe her and holding out as long as possible. Oh! Dating Sig since she doesn’t seem to hold her in any sort of regard.

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Lmao my mc is trying to be as peaceful as it’s possible, doesn’t really like fighting (but it’s all he’s good at so), told Jackie he’s just some guy, took pete and ran away with him + he’ll be romancing harper
let’s just say he’s not really found of our zeus

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Yes, I am playing my MC as peaceful as possible as well (on a meta level it’s kind of fun to see just how non-violent we can try to be, given the MC’s… situation). So I imagine I will be disappointing Jackie quite a bit by not being her attack dog - if he can help it, at least.

I’m also curious to see what that sort of playstyle might mean for the MC’s development down the line.

I’m not really sure who my MC will be romancing yet. I still have yet to meet everyone (one on one, at least), so I’ll see how the chemistry is once we do.

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our mcs are fighting - fighting with voices inside their heads :slightly_smiling_face:‍:arrow_up_down:
and jackie

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This was a great read!

  1. I tried to have a peaceful, upstanding MC with anger issues. That being said, I thought the rage was a really fun mechanic. I am excited to see how choices to rage or stay in control with impact the story, with so many people being wary of the MC.

  2. ALL of the characters are great. They are all intriguing and compelling. Will the MC take the helping Claudia with homework spot? Will it destroy multiple relationships if the MC pursues Dame and splits him from Johnny? I bet Harper will be a bombshell. I want to repair Mitch’s failed relationship. There are so many things that can unfold and it makes the story so exciting :sparkles:

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This is pretty great so far, im very happy using this rage ability didn’t make my mc come off as an edgy teen. The family of gods part plus the fact that this will be a romance story reminds me of Danmachi. Goodluck with this :))

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This was a super fun read (: Im looking forward to seeing where it goes.

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Just did the final update for the prologue hopefully. All the grammar stuff should be fixed now. And all the bugs. If you run into any issues you can message me on my tumblr or put them here and I’ll try to get to them. You’ll have to delete your saves and completely restart if you want to continue, sorry. But thats how dashingdon works with updates to chapters. :sparkling_heart:

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I’m confused is the patch out or is it soon to be out?

The patch was just fixing grammar and bugs in the prologue, and it’s already updated. I have not finished the next chapter.

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Hence why I said patch. It’s just you never updated the changelog.

Bro bro you are on your way up in the big leagues if you are not already there keep the amazing good job :+1::clap::clap::clap::clap:

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You know it’s good when people start glazing at only the prologue

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