Found it by accident but it caught my attention. The prologue introduces the gods and the world setting well. I can’t wait to get justice for the greedy betrayal despite everything.
I am curious to see more as well but ive noticed somethings that take away i think from what your going for. There is several pages in the demo currently that i think are pointless fluff reason being they are explaining the same thing and is dragged out this gets amplified when the demo speaks of the two perceptions the gods/goddesses have of whats to become of the MC we will get to play.
To the question on ROs kinda hard for me to answer lol and at this point not sure if the MC would pursue such after the betrayal.
there are not only the 13 gods there are many other minor gods and spirts in the world the 13 gods rule so the 14 th gods tale go around the divine world and thats why there are two perception for the rest ,you have to let the story unfold
Your WIP intrigued me a lot the gods sound interesting but they are so greedy…hopefully we can show them that even kindness can hurt…a lot when you hit them
I’m looking forward to more
Btw. Are all of the Gods involved in the betrayal? Maybe one or two didn’t know about it and we can try to persue them as our RO’s? Because I wouldn’t go back to those who betrayed us.
All gods very involved in the betayel or not to know that you have wait for future updates
And about the ro there will two books in the first part the player a very little interaction with the gods as player need time to recover their power
But yes the player will have interaction with minor gods , spirit and mortals
I will echo that a bit of the prose can feel repetitive and too flowery (after the fourteenth is introduced and described) but I don’t think it’s too egregious since I actually kind of like that style of writing. I like the setting and world building so far and of course the concept is great. Strangely few WIPs (ongoing anyway) that use the MC being a god in a high fantasy setting so I’m always happy to see more.
From the way it’s written that eventually the rumours and jealousy got to them, I’m interested in finding out if it was really just a natural process or if someone/many someones were behind it all.