So I’m new to this and I thought I would put my idea into the mix and gauge people’s responses before I went full tilt into it.
Divil is a young demon hatchling. Unfortunately he hatched a little too early and began wandering through the Halls of Hell unsupervised. Unbeknownst to the rest of the underworld Divil ended up climbing up and out the nearest Hell Mouth and finds himself in the middle of New York (I’m open to changing the location based on decisions made).
Depending on the choices that this young demon spawn makes he begins to embark on a career of good or evil. He can work his way up to the Presidency by using politicians as puppets, destroying or healing the world. He could also develop a military style career, find that he has a penchant for the creative or he could even dedicate his existence to creating a large criminal syndicate/charity.
The possibilities are endless for this cute, all powerful, a-moral Satan spawn.
I’m assuming this is ok to post but please let me know if it needs to be somewhere else/not put here.
Finally managed to work out how to get a play test up here. This is still pretty rough version but I’m keen to get people’s thoughts on the tone of the writing.
I’m also keen to hear thoughts on whether or not to write everything in 2nd or 3rd person. I’ve left both in this version so that you can see how both work. I’m asking at this stage because I don’t want to push through another 20,000 words only to be told that the tone is terrible
Looking forward to hearing what people think so far. It will not be gender locked but at this stage I’ve not added the extras.