If you feel like it. I don’t mind. Can’t guarantee I’ll be able to watch them all any time soon but I’ll get round to it.
O_o really? Awesome, top two anime on my hit list now. Cheers 
Just playing through now and changing this post as I go.
Opening: I like your attention to detail with precognition, although you pegged the part about possible futures absorbing an individual’s life, you missed that seeing what could happen leads to depression at the thought of everything that could go wrong. Why the color black for the medical personnel? any backstory behind that?
Mingling Session: ok, those twins creep me out. I feel like there are so many branches to dig around in here. Are they all just lore based or effect later gameplay? Also, did I meet the blue haired girl before hand? we talked as if we knew each other.
Back in my cell: have you been under anesthesia before? regaining of the consciousness is gradual, and while I’ve been put under 30+ times, my hearing never had problem when I woke up (except for procedures on my ears, but that was because of cotton. Opening my eyes was always the biggest problem, and while I’m conscious I slowly take in my surroundings, I doubt being shaken would be recognizable oddly enough, it’s hard enough to realize you’re still laying down, the sensation would most likely register, but I personally wouldn’t recognize it for sure at first. Although the part about falling back asleep easily is spot on. I’ve fell into a normal sleep immediately several times, but I’m always craving food after (although I’ve heard this is a more personal one, everyone has different habits when making up from anesthesia.) Also, why gas? injection is a much more effective method that gives the victim less chance to fight back, although if memory serves, gas is used on children for reasons I never knew. Although gas usually does require somewhat co-operation from the patient/victim, as even holding your breath in short bursts can keep your consciousness. Although I’m still unclear if exposure time or concentration is what matters, because I asked the doc once and she said that they gradually increase the percentage as opposed to oxygen entering simultaneously.
Picking my stats: A short description of the effects of each stat should be added in my opinion, but it’s an opinion, nothing more.
Four Years Later: nothing to comment.
Year 10: I was fighting will the other apprentice, and found a misspelled word. movement of the top half of your body. Maybe with better training you'll be able to completely break free. Although you can't manoeuvre your feet you take up a defensive stance as best as you can, positioning your arms for attack.
It should be “maneuver” not “manoeuvre”
I don’t know why my timing was off with the kick, I spent two points on the martial arts stat.
A strange morning: I had a lapse in memory, but the “writing in progress” thing kinda threw me off.
ending(current) well ok, I suppose I’ll be trying out some different playthroughs, but this is my initial game, while immersion was broken by the parts that were unfinished, this was unavoidable. What I did enjoy was that the writing was smooth enough for me to get immersed in the first place. The concept as you seem to be displaying it is well enough that I will most likely be a customer for the final product, and I will enjoy seeing it progress.
Thank you for the feedback @TechDragon610, not a lot of people seem to leave any feedback.
Yes I admit I have missed parts where you should be more mentally affected. I’ll address these parts before the next update.
With the Black Coats I initially thought of black in respect of those who died in The Nuclear Massacre. Also, they’re mostly made up of people who believe they are doing a world of good. Though their actions prove otherwise. I’ll work that into the story (the colour of the coats).
With the Recreation Day, I plan to have it affect later game play as well. It sort of does for age ten already. If you meet Sera instead of the twins, she offers to be your mentor. Provided your ESP percentage is high enough. (Yes I was going for the creepy feeling with the twins 
). If you meet neither and have a high enough ESP percentage, you can meet the other mentor. If you have a high ESP percentage but don’t have a mentor you end up in a special program. If not, well I still need to add more to that branch. The blue haired girl “Narita” is just really friendly.
I chose gas for a number of reasons. If you resist, the percentage can be increased to knock someone out. (Happened to me lol. I’ve been under quite a bit. I’ve had oral medication, gas, needle and numbing cream). With the gas, in my experience I actually hear everything in echoes. All sounds even talking. It’s very annoying and hard to fight. Also, another reason I chose gas is if you wish to target the entire room you can get everyone provided it’s locked, rather than one by one. I may use the idea of needles later for the more stuborn.
There is a short description under the stat screen menu. I assumed people would just check there. I’ll add a mini description there.
Ah you fought Sakeri. I forgot what circumstance (stat) I had for that. You can break free fully though. Or not at all. Thanks for the spelling error. I must have skimmed over it.
I know which part you’re talking about. The coding got me down on that part so I ended up working on other parts and left a place marker. Sorry about that.
Good to hear that you’ve enjoyed the WIP so far. Comments like that spur me on to keep writing and researching.
The colour does symbolically link back to it, but their work is dark none the less. Majority of them are quite evil and tortuous. Does it work better without the explanation of where the colour choice comes from?
Like allow readers to make their own assumptions?
I’m glad I could give some motivation. you posted this looking to get a fan base and get feedback, so I figured I’d add a bit to both
Can we use electrokinesis to summon lightning from the sky like cole from the end of infamous.
(Crosses fingers)
@faewkless you sure you don’t have precognition? For electrokinesis I plan for you to be able manipulate other forms of electricity (not created by you), lightning, electric fields and force fields etc. Looking at the site I was referencing on electrokinesis, it does mention a Cole MacGrath. I’m not sure if I put that in the begining or if I just accidentally put a spoiler out there.
@TechDragon610 thanks again. Feedback is always appreciated
I have like a short list off potential powers
Revitalizing muscles (electrical therapy)
Cauterizing wounds (like doctors do)
Flying (using electromagnetism)
Summoning lightning (previously stated)
Controlling someones nervous system (ultra high level move)
Etc…
Thank you for your suggestions @faewkless controlling the nervous system would rely on being able to control the electrons in the brain? I agree, you would have to be a master to have that level of control.
The body is commanded by small bursts of electricity, and you’d be surprised how fragile we are to it. Someone with electric powers could simply make a current go through your heart for less than a second and you’d be a goner.
Stun guns work but having safeguards that stop the current from running long enough to kill you, but some deaths are still reported.
Regardless of that, electricity is without a doubt to strongest of the offensive powers to choose from.
i love the electrokenesis fight scene, but shouuldnt you be able to take down the whole group? i mean you can shock them all to sleep
Did you mean when you fought them all at once? Or did you just fight her 1v1?
I actually found it really hard to get my hands on that anime T_T" I’ve got to keep trying in the next couple of weeks. Also, I’ve been really busy with family events lately… they’ll keep going for another couple of weeks so I haven’t had much spare time. (Spare time over the past couple of days has been spent catching up on sleep lol). I’ll let you know when I’ve checked those ones out first. My anime list might get too huge and then I’d never get round to writing lol
I really wanted to watch the gakuen alice first, but the local stores didn’t have any T_T" I read online that it’s child friendly so I figured the kidlettes might want to watch it too.
Magical index!!! That anime is amazing the powers too, try it
Hmmm how about demon king daimo? Or needless ~ that was epic!! Also
freezing and fairy tail
Too many H?? Explain
He probably means Ecchi, Which is also called softcore Hentai.
Anime that has nudity,sexual humour or perverted situations but no sex is classed as Ecchi.