Azmuran: The Rise Of A Vampire Lord (WIP - 80k Total Wordcount)

Nah, just make the flavor text reflect the fighting styles. The MC is a powerful vampire and should be a force to be reckoned with, even if they eventually lose. Just have them fight differently depending on the weapon. Wulfric’s fangs would be close, quick strikes with lots of dodging and possibly grappling. Almost zero parrying. Swords would have more parrying and would stay more at a distance because they have the reach. And so on.

Then maybe it shouldn’t be an option at all. The MC can talk about having it, but if they wouldn’t use it, don’t give us a greyed out option suggesting they could. Idk, I don’t know enough about the story, but I’m basing this from a gameplay perspective.

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Cool, so I came to the conclusion of rewriting the entire prologue but this time it will start few hrs before facing Luce (that way the story will showcase MC being powerful and a force to be reckoned with like you mentioned). It shows the real reason why mc was already tired. (It was not because MC was fighting Luce.

Or I jump the scene where mc close to dying (But that one will have very little word count)

At least this way it won’t dilute the story and Luce’s capabilities of being able to dispose the vampire lord

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The success of either depends on the execution, so just do what feels right. You got this. :+1:

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bug

Yo shit is fire it’ll be pretty cool when it’s more developed also was wondering if you’d mind throwing in a scythe as a weapon they’ve always been my favorite ones to use no need to worry tho if your not interested

No problem, will add that one too :ok_hand::fire::fire::fire::fire:

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Fixed. Thank you very much :fire::fire::fire:

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Thank you!:raised_hands::fire::fire::fire::fire:

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Another bug

And the saves don’t work anymore

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What’s happening here this in not active are you telling me it JUST started and is abonding already I knew I wasn’t to get my hopes up and look know what a disappointment

:joy::joy::joy:it’s not abandoned, been rewriting the prologue and I’m 10k words in but I’m hardly halfway through. This new version takes place 2hrs before the old version. I can update what I have but there’s not enough content in terms of choices.

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Bro, it’s only been a month. There are WiPs that have been inactive for years that are still being worked on. Have patience.

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Keep up the good work.This WIP is very intriguing and I am a lover of vampire stories.

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Gonna post the prologue soon, just got to finish this one scene where mc fights against military men in some room and the brief conversation with Luce. Oh and also the fighting techniques for the new scythe weapon​:fire::fire::fire:

And then, once we done there, I can finally move on with the story😭I have so much that I want to extract from my brain and put on these folders!!!

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I’m looking forward to it :grinning::confetti_ball:

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Will we be able to choose the The Sword Of Magnus as our weapon I really like and it has abilitys

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At the new version of the prologue, unfortunately that won’t be possible. But along the chapters all I can say is it depends whether or not your mc can defeat Francis

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Interesting

Very interesting