Atheina: A Story of the Gods (WIP) [REVAMPED CHAPTER ONE; 21 August 2019]

John: Oh yeah that’s why I’m here, we need to scavenge before we’re found. I vote on scavenging Cams bank account. After all she won’t need it unless she can even survive a bullet to the head.

I think you guys should probably create your own private message group so you don’t flood the thread.

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!5 muintes lator.

Alright we did that now on to the next city

we did that but it got nuked as well as the other city.

The End

Did you guys like the ending

Could have used more divine intervention but otherwise perfect

Quietly watching and refreshing the article to see if the update is out.

All right heres the director’s cut, it wasn’t in it because the producer thought it would alienate non beliver audiances

Then it was all white, but then there was a voive.

Voice: I am Lord darkener

Randy: I told you guys he was real

Lord Darkner: all of you will be reborn as your bodies were before the crisis.

Kevin (not stunt double): Where will we work

Lord Darkener: At Channel 5

Everyone gasps except Edward

Edward: Really

The End

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Walks up from the depths, somehow alive after all the events that transpired with the Channel 4 crew.

Alright you primitive screwheads, listen up. This Holds up the Atheina script is my boomstick! The 362k words manuscript for Atheina. CoG’s top of the line. You can find this in the Mind-blow Department. That’s right, this baby was made in Mordor, Middle-Earth. Now, I don’t know if you all think that’s good or bad but I’m the guy with the script so tell me - who wants some?

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You’re gonna get sniped

Those deadites over there wants some.

points to a massive horde of Athenia obsessed fans Now let’s go kick some ass. Who got the bubblegum?

“Looks to see if their is any update” nope just more crazy.

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Will gladly take it if it is ready…

The suspense it killing me :laughing::laughing::laughing::laughing::laughing::laughing::laughing::laughing::laughing::laughing:

UPDATE!!!

This is a rough update of chapter 1. It’s not perfect but for my own sanity, I’m posting it now. I can’t tell you how many times I have revised the outline. I should stick to my outline more :sweat:

So I still have to add stats and stuff. I’ll do that later on the week.

So let me officially welcome you all to Atheina!

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I can hear the world fangirling right now.

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Shush, the chapter is amazing. Good work!

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Clicked nothing else and got an error.

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Yeah me to it seems to happen with every option

I’ll remove the save button and see if the problem goes away.

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