I found a typo
“How about the human souls that Gray took1?”
Short horns doesn’t work either. But good stuff so far.
I see the problem, just give me a sec to fix it
@Darkner I found an error when choosing to end the immortal humans. When selecting to collect the souls of as they slept this window popped up.
“prologue line 611: Invalid expression; expected name, found STRING at char 7”
omg the prophecy has come!
I got an error when trying to collect the souls
And none of the choices worked when I was told we were in Atheina
Besides that though I’ve enjoyed the parts of the game that I got to see
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Found some typos:
“The simple version skips a lot of details. This complete version of the hnadbook is for those who care about having rational rules in a game that are clear and consistent, and leave no stone unturned.”
Some time passes by. Unexpectedly, Chloe stops her typing and looks at you.
“$last_name}, I have a question. It’ll seem random but there is a point behind it.”
Monday morning.
The teacher enters the classroom. The class quiet downs.
Should be ‘quiets down’
You turn to see who it belongs to. You find a grey skinned man with pointed ears smiling at you, his wearing a butler’s uniform. His white hair glistens as he approaches you.
Should be “he’s”
“I haven’t fired anyone, just of yet. I have a special guest with me, her highness is here.”
That “of” should be something else or removed.
Now that Sheera is close to you, you take note of her light green kin tone and her baby face
The front fell off the word skin 
“Your highness! Words cannot describe how happy I’m to see you.” He dashes towards you with tears in his face. “I ran all the way from Area 6 when I had the news.”
Should be “heard” perhaps?
“Well, your highness,” Sheera is the one who responds first to your question, "souls don’t have to eat per se. It’s not like their going to die again
Should be “they’re”
About 450 years ago, the Gods disappeared from Atheina. This marked the beginning of the Second Cataclysm. Magic disappeared from the face of the planet and the seven races couldn’t would it any longer.
Erm. What?
Indeed it’s a chilly morning. Kregt takes out his pipe and lights it. He puffs a few times.
He’s stomach grumbles. He wonders what the cook will prepare for breakfast today.
“His” you want there
“Hush. I know you stole from me. Mithril steel swords don’t just vanish in thin air. So stop struggling, you’ll be swimming with the fish at the bottom of Lake Theodmon in just a minute.”
“in to”
Kregt has a special ability. He can sense when someone is lying to him, which has proven very useful for the line of work his in. This is all thanks to the small amount of magic in him. A rarity for a goblin.
“he’s”
“Who do you take me for? Killing innocent people is not my style.” Kregt arches his brow. He has a code that he abides by, and there are somethings he just won’t do
Needs a space between some and things
Yu tries to protest but Kregt’s underlings drag him away.
Should that be “he” or “Vesper”?
When Kregt arrives back home, he’s son and daughter greet him.
“His”
Blood sputters from his mouth. He’s just been poison, by his own children. Kregt tries to stand so he can get help but collapses on the floor.
“poisoned”
“You’ll only die when her highness orders you so.” They eyes of the raven glow. Kregt vomits out the poison instantly.
“The”
Kregt almost passes out due to shock. He’s being chosen? But his a thug.
“He’s”
“You’re right for the job. her highness has seen something in you and wishes to mold you into a a worthy champion.”
Capitalise both “H”
“This should accelerate your progress. You’ve got three month to reach at least Level 30. Do you understand?” The raven looks at him.
“months”
It’s also during this week, under the strong suggestion from Sheera, that you issued a decree instituted a Commission of Inquiry to review all edicts enacted by the previous supervisors of the Underworld. According to Sheera, the point of all of this is to remove unnecessary laws from the realm statute book. It goes without that she’s the one leading this commission.
add “saying” after “without”
On top of the paperwork you had to deal with, Salaam insisted on leading you around Area 0-6 where the Underworld prisoners are kept. He pointed that even though the guards were few, they were still very competent.
“Areas”
“You’re still as formal like the last time I was supervisor here, Nevarth. I’m only here because of my official duties as secretary. Aztia needs to be informed about the upcoming council meeting.” Bymir says.
“as”
Bymir wastes no time and pulls out a bottle of whiskey from his hat as though he knew before hand Nevarth hid all the alcohol. The name of this is bottle is called literally ‘The Good Stuff’.
delete
She’s concentrated on a board game that has black and white stones on it.
“concentrating”
“So… you’re back. Congratulations.” Her eyes then widen. “I-I don’t mean that’s a g-good thing you got transported in this world. Maybe it’s a good thing or bad thing. I don’t know… I-I should just keep quiet.”
“to”
“Go has more simpler rules than chess. Thus I get less of a headache playing it.” She waves her hand and the board disappears.
delete
“Elizabeth, or should I say Aztia? I’ll just use both for now. D-do you wanna play chess with me?” she asks sweatly.
“sweetly”
“Okay.” You sit across her.
Add “from” after “across”
Irena’s demeanor immediately changes. She rests her face on her hand and looks intently on the board.
“at”
Okay that’s all the errors I spotted on this run through. Looking forward to more progress 
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Yes it does and the chapters awesome. Especially that fight with the giant.
That trident is amazing by the way. I felt like the child of Thor and Poseidon after their stormy copulation.
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The simple version skips a lot of details. This complete version of the hnadbook is for those who care about having rational rules in a game that are clear and consistent, and leave no stone unturned
Handbook
$last_name}, I have a question. It’ll seem random but there is a point behind it.”
The code
Not paying attention to other posts huh?
Nope… welp just dont mind it then
love the chapter.also im so glad you have a scythe as a weapon cause there dope.cant wait to see more
I found an this error
revelation line 606: bad label energy_fight
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Can you add like dual swords as a weapon choose
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Also this game sounds just like Percy Jackson on with more races
Eh not really I honestly don’t see any similarities.
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I do with the Titans declaring war on the gods
That’s just Greek mythology not Percy Jackson, which is what Percy Jackson is based on.
@Darkner Found an error in the code when going over the game with Chloe:
Some time passes by. Unexpectedly, Chloe stops her typing and looks at you.
“$last_name}, I have a question. It’ll seem random but there is a point behind it.”