So, I have decided to right a Choice of games Fanfic for the Wayhaven searies, located on "Hosted games, on the Choice of Games app.
However, I am running into a bit of a problem with some of the code, and all the *if stuff related to the different gender spapsific paths and such.
If I put my current code that I have currently, would someone be able to assist me in fixing it a bit? Please? I don’t want to mess this up.
Anyway, here is the code. It’s. I think it’s long, the hole thing is around 500 or so lines, so…
*title Wayhaven fanfick, book 2.01
*author: Jason 1Alpha8
*seene_list
startup
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
*comment TODO ETC.
* create Charming 50
*create Intimidating 50
*create impulsive 50
*create Cautious 50
*create sarcastic 50
*create Genuin 50
*create strength 10
*create heart 50
*create mind 50
*create Friendly 50
*create stoic 50
*create EasyGoing 50
*create Stubborn 50
*create optimist 50
*create Pessimist 50
*create Team player 50
*create Independent 50
*create logic 50
*create emotional 50
*create diplomicy 50
*create direct 50
*create careing 50
*create doesn't give a shit 50
*create gender "male"
*create he "he"
*create him "him"
*create his "his"
*create man "man"
*create sir "sir"
*create mr "Mr"
*create gender "female"
*create her "her"
*create hers "hers"
*create herself "herself"
*create woman "woman"
*create ms "ms"
*create name "name"
*create surname "surname"
*create fullname "fullname"
*create orientation true
*create hedero_sexual true
*create homo_sexual true
*create valentine "valentine"
*create bloodbonded "bloodbonded"
*comment Relationships
*create Morgan 50
*create Avva 50
*create Fera 50
*create Nat 50
*comment Male_variables
*create Adam 50
*create Felix 50
*create Mason 50
*create Nate 50
Prologue.
*line_break
I grunt, putting my device down, rubbing my eyes, even though I don't need to see.
The idea of getting up at 4.45 in the morning is good, but when I stay up tell 2, well... Kind of shits on it now, doesn't it?
Grimaceing, I slide into bed, putting my phone on it's little table.
*line_break
Scowling, I push myself out of bed, and put my phone back on my desk... After all, don't need to have it beaming rays into my head the hole dam night... If it does that, but better safe... After all, my mind is all I have...
I mutter something crude, stumbleing back to bed, and flopping down under the sheets, pulling them up. I sleep naked now, since it is warm enough to do so now.
I am not quite sure, when the weather cools, if I won't just keep doing it...
"Speaking of which... What am I, anyway?
*choice
#I am a man.
Yes, I am a man... I like sleeping naked because... Well, that's my business...
*set gender "male"
# I am a woman...
"Yes, I am a woman... I like sleeping naked because... Well, that's my business...
*set gender "female"
*goto prologue_second
*label prologue_second
Shrugging, I role onto my back in my large, 2 person bed...
"Weight... "If this is a 2 person bed... "A, fuck it, it's 2 in the fucking morning, on a Friday... Might as well be dirty now...
"If I had a choice, and the willing option... Who would I want in this bed with me?
*choice
#I want a woman in this bed...
Of course, A woman... What am I thinking? "No, don't answer that... It won't end well for you... Not this early in the morning...
*if gender "male"
*set "orientation" hedero_sexual
*else
*set "orientation" homo_sexual
# A man.
Of course, I want a man in this bed with me... What am I thinking? No, don't answer that, it won't end well for you... Not this early in the morning...
*if gender "female"
*set "orientation" hedero_sexual
*else
*set "orientation" homo_sexual
*goto prologue_third
*label prologue_third
I close my eyes, I don't actually need to do so, being able to sleep with my eyes open, or be awake with them closed might be fun to do, to troll people, and sleep... I hope that I will have some interesting dreams... I want some stuff to right, after all...
*page_break "Your wish, and all that...
*goto first_page
*label first_page
I hit something, hard. I grunt in surprise more than pane, slapping my hands down to see if I rolled off my dam bed or something, but...
"Why am I on wood? This isn't my floor... "What the...
Then, I feel a pressure in my mind. It's faint, almost not there, but... I can feel other things, shadowed within it, pane? "Yes, pane... So, much...
It's emotional, and it's growing, along with the pressure. Fast...
I can here voices. 4 of them, talking. I hunch, noticeing that I am still naked...
"This is one fucked up dreem, I think. Then...
The pane grows, massivley. Along with it, I can feel? No, here? Screams? Agganized, terrafide, pittiose screams of torment...
I start to get angry. I know where they are comeing from... I want them out..... I want to stop the fucker who is doing this... They must be purged...
"Get out of my head! Get out of my head! Get out of my head! I snarl, curling in on myself as if that alone will shield myself from the fucking pane, the screams, the rage? "Shit, that last one is not mine...
I snarl, hurling myself forward towards the fucking screams...
I, though dimley, here a surprised grunt, then I hit something with full force, the thing moveing back. My fists lash out. 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1... I can also, dimley, here a howling noise... I think it's me? Not that I care... Just...
Most of my blows don't land, but some do. A jaw? Perhaps. I don't...
*set Morgan -5
Strong arms rap around my torso, trapping my arms at my sides, yanking me back. Snarling, I slam my head back, hard. It doesn't hit anything.
After I recover from almost breaking my dam neck, which herts... "Didn't think you could feel pane in dreams? "Perhaps I am lucid dreeming... "Finally! "Not for now...
I snarl, yanking, still snarling, trying to get at the screams, to punch the one torturing in it's face... To free the inosint, for I know they, the one screaming is inosint... Punish the guilty... Get the fucking emotions that are not mine out of my dam head...
Then, I feel more pressure, along with something else.
*choice
# A fealing of peace, calm. Tranquility? The calming of the storm that rages inside me...
*set Nat +10
I feel it flood through my body. It soothes my rage, calms my fear, the pane, and screams retreating...
*goto next_first
# Unyielding strength, stoic calm, the knowing that I will always stand? It will always stand between me, and the pane... The fear... the howling...
*set Avva +10
It flows through my body, the fear, rage, screams all breaking like waves on a wall of unyielding will ... Soon, I calm...
*Goto next_first
# A feeling of joy, happyness that rushes over me, although there is something else, shadowed in it, but for now, I don't care... It drives the pane, rage, fear away... Leaving nothing but a glowing light... "How do I know that? "I don't even know what, Light, is...
*Set Ferra +10
It flows through me with such strength that I can't help grinning like an idiot... Soon, I calm... How could I not?
*goto next_first
# I feel, gruff annoyance, frustration. However, not directed at me... Directed for, me
I feel the knowing that it, the feeling? "No, the person behind... Can take anything, and keep on going... Will take anything...
*Set Morgan + 10
It soon overwelms the pane, rage, fear... It soon calms me...
* goto next_first
*lable next_first
I relax in the grip, blinking. Then, I feel the cold air across my entire body, and remember I am naked...
"Fuck, I mutter. Should have warn dam pants... Ugg, next time...
I here a gruff laugh, and a shushing sound in a much genteler voice at that...
I reach back, 1 hand landing on something... It's...
*goto first_page_second
*label first_page_second
*if "male"_heddero_sexual
*goto_female_variable
*if "male"_homo_sexual
*goto male_variable
*if Female_hedero_sexual
*goto "male"_variable
*if "female"_homo_sexual
*goto female_variable
*label female_ variable
I feel something. It's round, and soft, and... "O, fuck... I think. That's just swell... I grimace... "Need, better...
Then, my horror grows as I feel all my blood start going down...
"Everyone can see...
"Would it be too much to ask if I just died right now? I think, then, because I have to say something, I open my mouth...
"I... "I didn't... I mumble, before a wave of tiredness crashes over me, and I collapse backwards, adding insult to injury by my head bouncing off the same brest...
*if Nat = 60
*goto Nat_first
*if Avva = 60
*goto Avva_first
*if Morgan = 55
*goto morgan_first
*if Ferra = 60
*goto Ferra_first
*label male_variable
My hand lands on something. It's solid, but...
"O, I mutter. It's...
My horror grows, as I feel something... "O, I mutter.
Everyone can see now...
"Would it be too much to ask if I just died now? I think... "Then, since I do have to say. Something, I open my mouth...
"I didn't meen... "I didn't...
A wave of tiredness flows over me, and I collapse backwards, adding insult to injury by my head bouncing off the same solid chest...
*if Nate= 60
*goto Nat_first
*if Adam=60
*goto Avva_first
*if Mason = 55
*goto Morgan_first
*if Feelix=60
*goto Fera_first
*label Nat_firsst
*if "male_hedero_sexual Nat looks at the form, currently slumped against her. She is, confused. Not something she is very used to being...
*if "female"_hedero_sexual Nate looks at the form, currently slumped against him. He is, confused. Not something he is very used to being...
*if "male" He is sleeping now. she can tell that, even without the gentle breaths rushing over her skin.
*if "female" She is sleeping now. she can tell that, even without the gentle breaths rushing over her skin.
"Ha, Morgan quips. "Should have warn pants... "That's funny... "Then, what happened right after... "I wish I could record that... "I would watch that over and over again...
Nat glowers at her, annoyed.
She blinks, startled. "Why would she be annoyed? By Morgan, of all people?
"What's this... The detective says, entering, and looking around.
*if "male"_hedero_sexual "Nat? Why is there a naked man half lying on you?
*if "male"_homo_sexual "Nate? Why is there a naked man half lying on you?
*if "female_hedero_sexual "Nate? "Why is there a naked woman half lying on you?
*if "female"_homo_sexual "Nat? "Why is there a naked woman half lying on you?
"I would think something like that from Morgan, but you?
Nat grimaces. *if "male" "He was punching Morgan, so I grabbed him? Then...
*if "female" "She was punching Morgan, so I grabbed her? then...
"Detective? Morgan says, her grey eyes locked on the man, "Look down?
"What the... The detective says, after
*comment TODO Find way to insurt gender here, so don't have to put so many *if's
*if detective_"male" He looks up. "I don't need to see that... "I don't want to see that...
*if detective_"female" After she looks up. "I don't need to see that... "I don't want to see that...
Morgan, Nat scolds.
"What? Morgan says, grinning.
"Detective, Ferra chimes. "Do you happen to have some spare pants?
The detective blinks, turns to her, and...
*goto pants
*label Avva_first
*if "male"_hedero_sexual Avva looks at the man, currently slumped against her. She did not quite know what to think, which made her... Not nervus, but...
*if "female"_hedero_sexual Adam looks at the woman, currently slumpepd against him. He is not quite sure what to think, which... Not worries, but...
*if "male"
He
*if gender_"female"
She
is a Human. Smells like a human, looks like a human. Fights like a Human. A very scaired one, at that...
However... She grimaces, shakeing any more thoughts out of her mind, as she heres Morgan's chuckle.
"Well, well. Morgan says, still chortling. Strange, considering her normal adatude to most things.
"Looks like your speachless?
Avva just glares. She then notices the man's hand is still on her chest. Scowling, she shakes it off. The hand flops to the side, catching on her hip...
"If it's anything to go by, Morgan says. "Think he would be more mortafide than you if he were awake...
"I am not, Avva growls. Mortafide... She was not. The human had done this on axadent. That was all.
Even if he had not... Well, he was not going to be here for long...
"What's going on? the Detective says, entering the room.
"Avva? Why is there a naked *if "male"
man slumped against you?
*if "female"
Woman slumped against you?
Morgan, and Ferra both birst out laughing at that, while Avva scowls. Nat just sighes.
"It's, complecated... Avva growls.
Ferra turns to the detective. "Do you have any pants? She asks, eyes twinkling at Avva.
"Why would he... The detective glances down, grimaceing.
"I don't want to know...
*goto pants
*label Morgan_first
The man slumps against Morgan. She is...
She rubs her jaw. It doesn't heart, he is just a Human after all, but... She rubs it again. He had surprised her, rare for a Human.
He is sleeping now, breth comeing in, out. In, out. Hand still on her brest, which... "Well, he doesn't look half bad...
She turns, to see Nat glowering at her. "What? she asks.
"I know what your thinking, Nat says, tone sharp.
"What? Morgan asks. "He does not look...
"What's going, the detective's voice rings out, before
*if
"male"
"Why do you have a naked man slumped against you? "Well, why here?
*if "female"
"Why do you have a naked woman slumped against you... "Well, here?
Morgan shruggs. "They can't keep away, I guess...
The detective sighs. "I don't want to know...
Ferra's voice chimes, pulling Morgan's atencion to her.
"Detective, Ferra asks, eyes twinkiling at Morgan. "Do you happen to have any pants?
The detective blinks once, twice, then...
"Yeah... "Why...
"Don't, Nat warns, but the detective has allready looked down.
"I didn't need to see that... "I did not want to see that...
Ferra's face falls.
*goto pants
*Ferra_first
The *if "male" man slumps against Ferra.
*if "female" Woman slumps against Fera.
She holds him up, since he would otherwise fall, given his current pozission.
He smells like swet, and fear. Fera grimaces. She does not like fear from Humans. She does not like fear, periad, but especially from Humans... Well, not unless they are guilty, and this one didn't seem like it...
Fera glances to the rest of the teem. Avva had her arms folded across her chest. Nat stands, relaxed, in a poze that Fera knows meens she is thinking.
Morgan is looking at Fera, smirking...
"What's going on? The Detective's voice jolts Fera out of her thoughts.
* if "male"_hedero_sexual
"Fera? Why are you holding a Naked man?
*if "male"_homo_sexual
" Feelix? "Why are you holding a naked man?
*if "female"_hedero_sexual
"Feelix? "Why are you holding a naked woman?
*if "female"_homo_sexual
"Ferra? "Why are you holding a naked woman?
*goto Fera_explenation
*label Fera_explenation
"It's... Fera starts, then stops. "Complecated, Morgan growls. "It's complecated...
Fera smiles, and Morgan scowls.
"Detective. Morgan growls.
"Do you have any pants?
Also, yes, there is a good reason that the *author, is the way it is. If I get the OK to finish this, if it goes well, and if I do it well enough tthat the author might possibly put my character into the mane timeline, you will find out why…
So, yeah, if someone could help me out a bit. The indentation is a pane, but I should have that, if I don’t get distracted… More just all the *ifs, and if there is a better way to do that…
