Arthurian Tale: Camelot [153k] [Sep 29 2023]

[Mumble]

Arthur literally going frenzy and killing Accolon because he saw him outside his sister’s door, no questions asked…

…my married Mc and Lancelot the next day…

…careful they said…little did they know….

I feel like Ector is the true villain here, i am ready to befriend the ominous Merlin, but Ector…there is something about him…It maaaybe because i felt betrayed when i chose him to walk MC down the aisle but he still suspected us being a spy…I know it doesn’t mean anything and it’s nothing against us, buuut…I don’t know, I haven’t made up my mind about him yet.

Not Arthur asking us who we spent most of our activities with, and my MC confidently saying Morgana, while in truth she only went to see her once, instead she consumed all the activities that were available for Lancelot even those which didn’t concern him directly…

And then Arthur revealing that he spent most of them with Lancelot …

The drama is sprinkled every so subtly, i am living for it.

@parisgracex

Lancelot does not want to sleep with my mc…obviously that is not the be and end all I was just kind of surprised considering his reputation haha

Having read Guinevere, and getting familiar with the characters’ personality, this was also a surprising albeit a welcome turn of events for me ( with how many Arthurian legend inspired stories we are getting, it’s refreshing to see different takes on the characters ), what with Lancelot being chaste and Arthur jumping at every opportunity to steal a kiss from a romanced MC.

[Cain_Abel]

A small update is out just to fix some spelling/grammar issues and hopefully allow the player to attend a few more winter events before the chapter ends. If there are any more issues or problems, let me know, so I can fix it up.

I do plan on another content update to Chapter 3 before I move onto the next chapter. I already have a few areas that I know I’m going to improve on.

[Raven-w]

An Arthurian story?

Heck yeah, count me in!

[9GAG]

Since nothing really happens in the story I feel that its quite boring but I guess it is a slice of life story. Well thats my take on it.

[Tribal_Gawd]

I really like the update. The story is progressing really well! The only issue I have is that when you have it as Elaine, a lot of pronouns that are used for her are HE and HIM. The first couple times it happened it threw me off and I was confused on who it was talking about and than it finally clicked on the mistake. That is my only “issue “ over im loving it and it’s going pretty well.

[Cain_Abel]

@9GAG Sounds like this just isn’t the game for you. I can’t appeal to everyone unfortunately.

@Tribal_Gawd Glad you like it. I will have to have a look for these instances. Is it happening in every chapter or just chapter 3?

[Scowl]

This story is one of my favorites in the works. Your writing style is very straightforward without being dry or uninteresting. Everyone has such a strong sense of character as well, I’m incredibly attached and invested in a lot of the NPCs very shortly after they’re introduced.

The pacing is great, and I’m having a ton of fun. I’d quote my favorite lines but we’d be here all day. Excited to read future updates!

[Tribal_Gawd]

I should have taken screenshots to show where, sorry didn’t think about that. But I believe it did happen in chapter 3 but also maybe once or twice before? I’ll replay it again tomorrow or the day after to see where exactly.

[Douglas_Mckeever]

It’s fine that you don’t like it. I was replying to someone who said they were looking for other Arthurian CoG games but couldn’t find any.

[Denzil_Melgior_Nagel]

Um, I believe you replied to the wrong person.

[Douglas_Mckeever]

Nope, you replied to me a little while ago, when I suggested Pendragon Rising, to someone that was looking for Arthurian CoG games.

[Denzil_Melgior_Nagel]

Oh okay got you. I remember now.

[Tribal_Gawd]

@Cain_Abel
Here are the spots I saw it say him instead of her for the Elaine route. I will say the last one I’m not sure if it was supposed to be about Lancelot or Elaine. I’m pretty sure it’s Lancelot hitting Elaine but yeah.

[Cain_Abel]

Thank you very much, I will have these fixed for the next update.

[Dark_Stalker]

@Cain_Abel

Cannot be romanced if you marry Arthur/Elaine. She’ll see you as family!)

Mordred has entered the chat*

From swordsmanship to diplomacy you have a well-rounded education in every subject despite your father forbidding you from doing so

I have lost all respect for this man

Kind of felt like the asking about people prompts were really simple and repetitive. Is insert noun insert adjective. At least talking to Morgan

Not yet, your majesty.

Given that we have tone indicators established feel like that one could use one, the only reason I figured it wasn’t hostile was because there was an even more hostile option.

Love the awkward Elaine interactions.

Sir Kay

Honestly have even less patience for needlessly overprotective siblings. So this is a promise of violence

I like you," she smiles. “I hope very much that you will marry me.”

Relationship: Neutral

Given that I noticed the budding romance of Morgan and Ac, it feels like I was handed a chevok’s gun someone else stole it from me when Elaine got mad.

After visiting Morgan for the first time after Elaine slapped Ac with the bible.

You would forgive Her so easily

Her cap

We should definitely do that again," she smiles. “No wonder God makes us wait until marriage. If I had known how connected to you sex would make me feel, well, I think I may have been tempted.”

Silence temptress, to have had recreational sex, a moment’s weakness and I have been defiled forever, I must pray so that the Lord may enter my heart and may He forgive my weakness. To have fallen so low, you may lift a sword with ease, but can thou even hoist a bible with thine sinful heart?

*Now I have fulfilled my duty."

“You duty?” She looks devastated, "I hope this was not just for duty*

You duty

Your duty

*“Never again, I will never abandon Camelot again. And it is about time that my advisors learn that I am the ordained queen.”

Morgana whispers so only you can hear*

That is Elaine talking right? It seems weird to mention a whisper but not says what the whisper was.

Also to date Morgana right after Ac dies, Isk if your bravery or rizz is more impressive at that point

[Mndy23]

I’m a new reader over here.
So far my feedback is very positive.
Arthur wanting no kids was a deal breaker for me, I was just so ready to marry him. Glad I chose to broke the “contract” because I’ve been enjoying interacting with the other ROs quite much!
I love the slice of life aspect of the game

[Cain_Abel]

@Dark_Stalker
Thank you! Lots to work on. And yeah I checked my code and Morgana should have whispered something, but I put the wrong number in, leaving it blank. I will get these fixed for the next update

@Mndy23
Thank you, very much for the support.

[Lian]

I’ve loved the 3 times that I played it.

I have a question, there will be love triangle between Arthur, Lancelot and the MC right? Clearly its seems like we are going the Gueneviere route.
Also, there will be a way to romance Arthur even if you reject the wedding proposition? It doesn’t seem like he and her wife really loved each other, and they even have problems, right?

[Cain_Abel]

I don’t want to give away any spoilers but affair routes exist. But if you didn’t marry A/E you won’t be able to try again.

Pleased you’re enjoying it!

[Cain_Abel]

Progress Update:

Currently, my focus is on fixing up the reported problems in Chapter 3 and improving on some areas I’m not happy with yet. Vitally, I need to implement a new route into Kay’s romance, which is rather difficult to get into.

I have also officially just started the writing of Chapter 4, which means that those of you who check my Progress Tracker on the first post will start to see a word count fairly soon.

All the recent feedback has been brilliant, and I am always happy to receive more! Thank you all very much!