A Supernatural Story WIP (Next Update: Late January/Early Febuary)

adult-fiction
gender-choice
low-fantasy

#81

Heres a error


#82

I really enjoyed the update but when i chose to have black hair it said i had dirty blonde and i was also wondering if we would be able to make our own name or are the ones we choose from the only options we get


#83


#84

Enjoyed the new update.
Also, found a bug where I chose to have brown hair but the next page says that I chose dirty blonde hair.

Looking forward to more scenes and more opportunities to make the sister angry lol


#85

I’m slow at this code thing okay! :sweat:
I got too focused on writing the chapter that I forgot to put it in! Sorry…


#86

Ugh, the evil alien takes over, my mc wants it out now, whatever the hell it is.


#88

You’ll come to find it useful, trust me :wink:

But it is possible to get rid of it, hard sure, but possible


#89

Right now it just takes over and further damages my mc’s body, that may be useful to it somehow, but it sure isn’t useful at all to my mc. The creepy Goa’uld voice is another dead giveaway. :unamused:
Wouldn’t be surprised if during those takeovers the mc also has the creepy, glowing eyes, so there’s really no denying it.


#90

This popped up…

Not sure if it’s just me or not… Also, I noticed something odd in the prologue;

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What makes that line odd is that in the paragraph before it it said this;

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See what I mean?


#91

What a bliming cliffhanger dam I want more I need more te voices in my head demand it auhgggh


#92

I see what you mean lol!


#93

This popped up


#94

I have a quick poll for you guys, it’s just something for me to think about when I write later chapters.

Do you guys want to have a post about potential RO(s) in the future? Or would you like to find out about them as the story goes?

  • Make a post
  • Find out as story goes
  • Don’t care

0 voters

I’m currently debating how many RO(s) I should put in, right now I have four in mind but I feel like I should add more.

I’m really not sure, what do you guys think?


#95

I recommend to not have many RO, since there’s many author who struggled with it. I’m also prefer few RO, since it’s usually more meaningful(this just personal opinion though) :thinking: but it’s your choice.


#96

Four is a solid number but it really just depends on what you’re comfortable with? You don’t need to add more unless you want to (not worth the stress tbh :smile: )


#97

That’s a good point to make, but I think there should at least be a bit more variety. Originally I had six RO(s): three males and three females, all with different sexual preferences. But looking at my game that might be a bit more than I can chew.

Sigh…I can only dream


#98

make 5 RO. let the fifth one a secret. like a twist or something.

if one the RO is a redhead please don’t make her a lesbian only

I have a weakness for gingers/redheads… it all started when I was but a little tadpole, I was watching the X men cartoon series and there she was ‘Jean Grey’ girlfriend of cyclops and Wolverine’s forbidden love.


#99

I’ll be sure to keep that in mind for You! :wink:


#100

I was more into Cyclops myself, of course everybody was “straight” back then, but Scott always was one of the cutest X-men.


#101

Progress Report 5!

Seven pages in as of now, but I’m getting a feeling that Chapter 2 will be one of the longer chapters that I have in store. Nothing is set in stone right now, but here is what I hope will be in the next update:

  • Talking with the parasite in our MC’s brain
  • Dealing with the MC’s mother
  • Finally meeting Clay’s girlfriend Sarah
  • A full introduction into the Supernatural world
  • Getting a sneak peak of the bigger villains of the story

This is what I hope will be in the next update, but I’m not sure how this will go. Hopefully I’ll be able it get four out of the five points in, but everything will show in time. Anyway, if you have any questions I’ll be happy to answer them.

And don’t worry, the post with the RO’s is coming soon… :wink: