Hmm…you see I was actually debating that possibility…
It would be cool and interesting…but probably would be a lot more work for me…
You know what? You’ve given me a great idea! 
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No problem.
I sure ain’t going to heaven after this. 
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I have the same problem
Oooh, its getting interesting!
I think I was able to fix the errors you found, please get back to me if you see that they weren’t fixed, if you don’t mind.
Getting a game-breaking error when I ask Officer Park what’s on his mind.
Also, you tend to misspell ‘tongue’ as ‘toung’ and ‘minute’ as ‘minuet.’
Progress report 6!
I’m closing on the 20th page in Chapter 2! As of now I have written 19 pages.
Entire game Word Count: 31,624
A whole new area is being opened up now with the inclusion of magic. There will be a bunch of exposition in this chapter, mostly told by the new characters being introduced. I haven’t even gotten to the part with Sarah, but it’s going to be interesting to say the least. I am also debating whether to/ how to add a sneak peak to the main villain of the story. Their character is sort of an enigma to me right now.
Expect the next update to happen either in late January or the beginning of February
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page45 line 83: Invalid indent? Expected an #option here, not *goto_scene
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Progress Report 7!
Currently I’m writing the interactions with the mother, and we’ll to be honest she’s a doozy. The MC will be meeting her when she isn’t at her best. I’m hoping that the adult figures in this game will have more impact on the choices you make. I feel like so many adult figures in young adult fiction are pushed to the side, when they shouldn’t be.
On a side note, as I’m thinking more about the Ro’s, I’m debating whether to have them limited to a specific gender. Currently there are five: two girls and three guys, all of them having different personalities, likes and dislikes. I don’t want to make the romance too hard to get, but I also don’t want it to be easy. Non of this is set in stone by the way, any thoughts or ideas?
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You think is wise to tell everyone your weakness?
Did you gave them names?
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Did you gave them names?
Yes, yes I did.
Guys: Clay Anderson, Thomas Pine, Sebastian Sokolov
Girls: Winter Haugen, Astra Bird
I’m still debating whether to have Sarah as a RO, but it’s looking not likely.
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It’s been a while since I’ve played, would you remind me again who Sarah is?
Oh, Sarah is Clay’s girlfriend! She hasn’t had a full introduction yet, but you’ll see her in the next update.
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You are going to have us cuck our best friend…nice
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I’m with you on not making her a romance.
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Do it!!! And after make a poll to see how many people romance her! That way we can strike then from the book of bros…broes (?)
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Oh no, you gonna make us a love triangle. Love triangles are the worst but fun.
Summary
You
A space between.
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