Progress Report 3!
I’ve been doing a lot of construction in the beginning pages of chapter one. I ended up rewriting most of the scenes, there was just a few scenes I thought were unnecessary. So, the word count has dropped but only to 15,749 words. It should spike back up soon.
I’ll need more detail, what kind of change would occur to the MC? Is it easily noticable? Can we hide it? Can we reverse it? And more importantly, will virgin sacrifices sates it’s hunger? Err…ignore that last bit.
No, there will be no virgin sacrifices as far as I know, however there is something that the parasite craves. However, I’ll need to explain what the parasite exactly is first.
What I came up with is that the parasite comes from a different dimension, one where magic runs rampant. It’s apart of a race of quasi-cosmic parasites that lack a physical body. They are known as on of their dimension’s oldest races and feed off of a being’s life energy. They live just under five hundred years, but the amount of life energy consumed adds on to their life span. Without a host they are vulnerable to magic, but with enough life energy they can be a force to recon with.
What usually happens is that they take control of a victim and force itself to control the body, shoving the victim’s consciousness to the back seat. Kind of like that void thing from Get Out, if you’ve ever seen that movie. The victim dies in their head, the parasite drains them of all of their life energy and uses the body as a shell until it doesn’t need it anymore.
The parasite that hitches an unwanted ride with are MC was caught by a group of Magi’s from it’s dimension, sealed into a gem and hurled through a dimensional rift. Through unknown means it lands on earth in the year 45 A.D and lays dormant until a line of unfortunate people find it.
What happens to our MC is that something stops that process from completing and they are left with an extra voice in their head that subtly influences their behavior with every choice they make. They start to have small parts of their body change like eye color, may be even have a second form to shift into.
Guys I’m realizing that I’m creating a world that has a lot of world building in it which is fun but also daunting. I’m thinking about finally getting into some supernatural territory in chapter two. Probably to get vampires and werewolves out of the way. What I really want to focus on is the magic aspect and on the small magic community on earth.
Cheers!